A tribute to my Father

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The depth of love, wide as the ocean
A symbol of hope, utmost devotion
Feelings of admiration, vivid in speech
As far as orbit of moon can reach.

Break of dawn before sun shall rise;
Marks an opening of opal blue skies.
Determined, strong, emotions ablaze;
Seek to conquer, with prudence, amaze.

Your words of wisdom, a golden thread
Shield from fear, foreboding and dread.
Beguile with charm, your winning smile;
Like floating red lotus through the Nile.

For all the times that we shared;
Of ways showing how much you cared,
Through darkness and times of utter despair;
I listen to murmurs of your silent prayers.

Love traversed through time and space;
Deeper the feelings, harder to trace.
Moonlight streaming across the lake;
A dozen roses in crystal vase.

 

Photo Credits: www.hdwallpapersinn.com

Form: BalladΒ 

Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United

Posted on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads

Comments

  1. Old Egg says:

    The depth of love that you see in your father is enhanced and deepened as you mature yourself. What a beautiful tribute you have written for yours.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Old Egg,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, have a wonderful week.

  2. Susan says:

    Full of words of praise, panegyric in nature, your poem describes to me an otherworldly presence more through feelings he raises in the poet than through experience of him. And it is high praise indeed! My favorite quatrain is:

    “Your words of wisdom, a golden thread
    Shield from fear, foreboding and dread.
    Beguile with charm, your winning smile;
    Like floating red lotus through the Nile.”

    I can imagine the golden thread and the smile. How wonderful. And enviable.
    Thank you.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Susan,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  3. Jae Rose says:

    What a beautiful poem…his goodness was obviously passed on…i expect he couldn’t ask for anything more…lovely piece.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Jae Rose,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, have a wonderful week.
      xoxo

  4. mary says:

    Your words are very heart-felt, Sanaa. I hope you will share this poem with him!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you so much dear, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciate your warm & loving remarks.
      xoxo

      PS: Yes I will share it with him on Sunday for sure πŸ˜€

  5. Sumana Roy says:

    Sanaa, so difficult to get to your blog today as my computer is not cooperating…I can’t see the poets’ names contributing for today’s prompt @ PU…
    This is a wonderful and heartfelt tribute to your father and such a soothing read….

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sumana,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  6. So beautiful, Sanaa. I especially love “I listen to murmurs of your silent prayers”. One thing about being a parent, even when kids are grown and moved a distance away, we never stop being parents, protective of our chicks. It sounds like you have a wonderful father. I love your cloud banner by the way.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much dear, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciate your kind & sweet words!
      xoxo

      PS: Yeah I wanted to be creative with that banner πŸ˜‰

  7. You’ve brought so many wonderful details…I love this description:

    “opening of opal blue skies”

    Beautiful work!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Hannah,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  8. Beautiful – thanks for sharing his picture.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Moskowitz,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, have a wonderful week.

  9. Debi says:

    Hope you shared this with your father – he will adore it.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Debi,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  10. Alan Stevens says:

    Heart felt emotions and memories captured so tenderly. Beautiful.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Alan,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a wonderful week.

  11. Claire says:

    What a wonderful tribute. And what a gift it will be to him when you share it with him πŸ™‚

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Claire,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  12. Mahek says:

    What a beautiful tribute! I love that line, “I listen to murmurs of your silent prayers.” Your father is very lucky to have you. Keep up the good work.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Mahek,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  13. This makes me smile for you–beautiful write!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Audrey,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, have a wonderful week.
      xoxo

  14. Rall says:

    Lovely tribute to your father.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rall,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, have a wonderful week.
      xoxo

  15. L. Moon says:

    A very special tribute – I know he is very proud of his daughter who I believe continues these faithful family characteristics.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Leslie,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciate your kind & loving words.
      xoxo

  16. G L Meisner says:

    Your love is very visible, great poem.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Mr Meisner,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a wonderful week.

  17. Sanaa,
    A most joyful tribute to your father, written with love. Absolutely lovely..Amazing pride too…
    Eileen

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Eileen,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  18. Panchali says:

    Ohh….that’s a thought – a wonderful one, Sanna. Beautiful tribute πŸ™‚

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Panchali,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  19. Everything a father should be! A beautiful tribute. (I can almost smell the rose.)

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  20. Tariq Rizvi (Father) says:

    Sanaa ! Thanks for the lovely poem.. your words have truly touched my heart to a depth indescribable! I am so proud of you πŸ™‚

    Love you so much πŸ™‚

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Love you too papa.. you mean the world to me πŸ™‚
      Happy Father’s Day πŸ˜€

  21. Nicholas V. says:

    A heartfelt and loving poem for that very special man in your life, Sanaa.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Nicholas,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciate your kind words.

  22. Kerry O'Connor says:

    This is a very special declaration of daughterly love.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Kerry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  23. hedgewitch says:

    I always appreciate seeing people share memories of a loving parent–to know that it exists in this cold world. A lovely tribute.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Hedgewitch,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  24. Rommy Driks says:

    I can feel the love and warmth in your words. How wonderful it is to have that kind of warm relationship with your father.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rommy,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  25. Kim Nelson says:

    Love the love in these stanzas, and the obvious lessons imparted by your much-admired father.
    Out of curiosity, what kind of planes are those in the background?

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Kim,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

      PS: Red Arrow Planes πŸ™‚

  26. Bjorn says:

    Such love for a dear father. Light and serious at the same time. Like a song.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a nice week ahead.

  27. gillena says:

    A very profound write Sanaa

    Have a good Tuesday

    Much love…

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  28. Jim says:

    Nice tribute, Sanaa. Dads and daughters have a special relationship. I am glad he prays for you (I listen to murmurs of your silent prayers) I pray for my daughters and hope to still when I am in my next world with the one who listens and answers prayers.
    You cloud header picture is beautiful.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Jim,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a nice week ahead.

      PS: I dedicated this poem to my dad on Father’s Day, he loved it πŸ™‚

  29. kaykuala h says:

    There can never be a stronger bond than a daughter with her Dad. It is untold joy when she is a successful young lady brimming with life’s wonders to offer to him. We’ll be seeing more of you Sanaa!

    Hank

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Hank,

      Thank you so much for such a huge compliment! So glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciate your warm & kind words, have a great week ahead!

  30. That is such a beautiful poem capturing so many emotions and yet threaded through with that unbreakable bond between father and daughter. Just a wonderful tribute

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Paul,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  31. What a beautiful tribute to your father. Your love shines with every line.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Susie,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

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