Observe them drift along rivulets black; as though
sweet thrill being whispered back. The evening swathed
with glimmer of wings; while moon and season blitheness
bring. Our mind thus whirls and heart does sing.
Their beauty fine like Nature’s grace; we lost measure
of both time and place. Our soul secluse much like swan;
who mourns forlorn in dirge of death. The pure eternal
course of life; tied around our bloom and breath.
Flutter of wings at time of dawn;
Our worries lost and fear is gone.
Photo credits: wallpapersend.com
Posted for Poetics @ dVerse Pub
46 Responses
Oh you had to take those wonderful swans… what a wonderful poem of romance.
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Wonderful words and imagery. Greetings!
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There’s a certain elegance, which Swans have, that your poem, Sanaa, conveys to reader. Only wish, my writing had more of, at times.
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Love the ballet of swans, specially the last couplet Sanaa ~
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They are as graceful and alluring as your beautiful lines, Sanaa! The ending is classic. Don’t forget the A to Z Challenge. Check it out!
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As graceful as your subject! The beauty well expressed in your words, Sanaa!
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Very beautifully written, Sanaa. Gorgeous.
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You have captured Sanaa the beauty and majesty of these beautiful birds…so nicely done..
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Simply breathtaking. I adore swans, and you’ve woven a gorgeous pond of words for them here.
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Their beauty is fine like nature’s grace! Indeed..swans are among the most graceful of birds. Your poem depicts them well.
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You are the first, so far, to use swans; very lovely tribute. Collective nouns certainly rate high on the prompt scale for me.
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Your poetic words do those graceful swans justice, Sanaa…so pretty.
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Your words and rhymes glide graceful as the swan ballet…an eloquent, elegant write, Sanaa!
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A beautiful ballet 😉
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Such an elegant poem for elegant swans 🙂
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Oh such beautifully elegant grace in the imagery Sanaa. Wonderful pen.
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Lovely Sanaa!
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This is so beautiful, Sanaa.
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Absolutely stunning. They do indeed glide across rivulets of black….so beautifully penned. Such graceful creatures and you’ve penned them so gracefully and gently here. You have a lilt to your writing and your spirit here….beautiful!
Late to the bar I am….one of our last days in Bermuda and this beautiful place tempts me away from my computer! So glad to read your piece here…….beautiful.
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So very beautiful, Sanaa!
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I love the sway of rhythm that goes sweetly with your exquisite writing. Such a wonderful tribute to these graceful creatures.
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Such a rich poem,it certainly does justice to the beauty of swans and of course ballet.
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