A Ballet of Swans

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Observe them drift along rivulets black; as though
sweet thrill being whispered back. The evening swathed
with glimmer of wings; while moon and season blitheness
bring. Our mind thus whirls and heart does sing.

Their beauty fine like Nature’s grace; we lost measure
of both time and place. Our soul secluse much like swan;
who mourns forlorn in dirge of death. The pure eternal
course of life; tied around our bloom and breath.

Flutter of wings at time of dawn;
Our worries lost and fear is gone.

 

 

Photo credits: wallpapersend.com

Posted for Poetics @ dVerse Pub

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Comments

  1. Björn says:

    Oh you had to take those wonderful swans… what a wonderful poem of romance.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  2. blogoratti says:

    Wonderful words and imagery. Greetings!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Blogoratti,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  3. therisa says:

    There’s a certain elegance, which Swans have, that your poem, Sanaa, conveys to reader. Only wish, my writing had more of, at times.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Therisa,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  4. Grace says:

    Love the ballet of swans, specially the last couplet Sanaa ~

    Thanks for joining us ~

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Grace,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  5. They are as graceful and alluring as your beautiful lines, Sanaa! The ending is classic. Don’t forget the A to Z Challenge. Check it out!

    http://www.a-to-zchallenge.com/p/what-is-blogging-from-to-z.html

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Hank,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  6. As graceful as your subject! The beauty well expressed in your words, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Walter,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  7. Sherry Marr says:

    Very beautifully written, Sanaa. Gorgeous.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  8. Michael says:

    You have captured Sanaa the beauty and majesty of these beautiful birds…so nicely done..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Michael,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  9. Simply breathtaking. I adore swans, and you’ve woven a gorgeous pond of words for them here.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello De Jackson,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  10. Mary says:

    Their beauty is fine like nature’s grace! Indeed..swans are among the most graceful of birds. Your poem depicts them well.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  11. You are the first, so far, to use swans; very lovely tribute. Collective nouns certainly rate high on the prompt scale for me.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Glenn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  12. Gayle Walters Rose says:

    Your poetic words do those graceful swans justice, Sanaa…so pretty.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gayle,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  13. lynn says:

    Your words and rhymes glide graceful as the swan ballet…an eloquent, elegant write, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Lynn,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  14. A beautiful ballet 😉

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Kim,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  15. Such an elegant poem for elegant swans 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Ladyleemanila,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  16. Raivenne says:

    Oh such beautifully elegant grace in the imagery Sanaa. Wonderful pen.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Raivenne,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  17. Other Mary says:

    Lovely Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  18. felicity says:

    This is so beautiful, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Felicity,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  19. lillian says:

    Absolutely stunning. They do indeed glide across rivulets of black….so beautifully penned. Such graceful creatures and you’ve penned them so gracefully and gently here. You have a lilt to your writing and your spirit here….beautiful!
    Late to the bar I am….one of our last days in Bermuda and this beautiful place tempts me away from my computer! So glad to read your piece here…….beautiful.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Lillian,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  20. So very beautiful, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Carol,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  21. Mish says:

    I love the sway of rhythm that goes sweetly with your exquisite writing. Such a wonderful tribute to these graceful creatures.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Michele,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  22. Georgina says:

    Such a rich poem,it certainly does justice to the beauty of swans and of course ballet.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Georgina,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  23. Lake kNows no
    gravity wHere
    Swan Lake
    flows..
    Ballet
    form
    essence..
    human
    balance
    free
    effortlesss
    with gravity…
    human
    drag
    on..:)

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Katie,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

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