You, among other things

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You know how there’s that
one song that gets stuck in
your head no matter where
you go and what you do, it
refuses to let go oh follows
on road that lies ahead.

The heart though stubborn
sometimes coincides with
the head, lets out feelings,
all of world’s truths unsaid.

The falling snow, the morn-
ing schedule are little but
disruptions that usher me
through.

No matter what hour and
time of day, you are deep
within like the song in my
head.

 

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Posted for ‘Poems in April’ @ Real Toads

Posted on Poetry Pantry @ Poets United

& on Monday Writes @ My Blog – Verses

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Comments

  1. Thotpurge says:

    That song in the head can get pretty annoying when you forget a line or two!!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Rajani ❤️

  2. An original metaphor and a wistful poem, Sanaa. I think we’ve all had that one song in our heads and hearts.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  3. paulscribbles says:

    Love the metaphor… I have had many such ‘songs’ in my head. Happy April and good luck if you go for 30 in 30.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Paul 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  4. Kerry says:

    I can definitely relate to this poem, Sanaa. Such attachments of the head and the heart and seemingly no cure!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry 😀 so good to see you ❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  5. Bjorn says:

    I know about that song… we might need some break for anything on repeat

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Bjorn ❤️

  6. This is an interesting format. I like the last stanza especially.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  7. Some one loved, someone lost…your words are true. You will carry them forever, deep inside you.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Annell 🙂 so good to see you ❤️

  8. Mama Zen says:

    Lovely writing, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, MZ 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  9. Ellecee says:

    I like “you are deep within like the song in my head” it’s a gift to have had a relationship that we remember so vividly. A lovely poem to start our month , 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ellecee 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  10. gillena says:

    YUP!!!

    HAPPY EASTER SANAA

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Happy Easter, Gillena 🙂

      much love… ❤️

  11. Robert says:

    The heart though stubborn
    sometimes coincides with
    the head, lets out feelings,
    all of world’s truths unsaid.

    loved these words… they really hit home

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Robert 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  12. Some people stick to the skull and heart and everything else, don’t they? So real, this loving bit.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Magaly 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  13. Marian says:

    This is wonderful, Sanaa. Those songs *do* take root in one’s head and heart, as people do.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Marian 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  14. Ah, this is beautiful, Sanaa! The song stucked in my head – it happens a lot with me 🙂
    The closing lines justly expresses the emotions.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Neeraj 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  15. Isadora Gruye says:

    I like that you chose the one song and how it relates to the narrator. I thought the falling snow as a particularly nice touch. Well Done!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Isadora 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  16. Oh I really loved how you connected this at the end…..yes a deep love is like that song stuck in our heads, although mine plays many tunes for the many moods of love.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Donna 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  17. Rommy says:

    Some songs harmonize with our own music so well, but we have to watch for those songs that drown out our own songs.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Rommy ❤️

  18. kanzensakura says:

    Lovely poem. The last stanza really speaks to me.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Toni 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  19. Ah, a song in the head for love.

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❤️❤️❤️

  20. Jim says:

    An “Ear Worm?” The song, “My little run-away” is sort of that way for me. Literally for songs, but I can’t think of a person I always have in my mind, not even Mrs. Jim. I think your poet is a lucky person if the one remembered is worthy.
    ..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jim 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  21. Susan says:

    This comparison works beautifully. I know intimately the effect.

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❤️❤️❤️

  22. Elizabeth says:

    I have people in my head, that no matter how long it has been, remind me of certain songs. And when they come to mind, the song will accompany the memory of that individual. I so agree with what you have said here. Thank you,

    Elizabeth

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Elizabeth 🙂 so good to see you ❤️

  23. Old Egg says:

    Yes the heart is stubborn creature isn’t it ? Often sapping our strength and resolve but hopefully saving us from trouble too.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Robin ❤️

  24. dsnake1 says:

    i think i can relate to that. sometimes the head and the heart sings as one, but most days they are not on speaking terms. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Cheong 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  25. Myrna says:

    Love the title, love the poem and love the sentiment. This is a sweet, unique love poem. Beautiful.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Myrna 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  26. Ayala says:

    Love the metaphor. Lovely piece!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ayala 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  27. ZQ says:

    Outstanding work to capture the painting!
    ZQ

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, ZQ 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  28. Wendy Bourke says:

    An eloquent and thoughtful contemplative piece, that finishes with a lovely simile.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Wendy 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  29. gillena says:

    Thank you for linking to Monday WRites Sanaa

    Much🌼love

    1. Sanaa says:

      My pleasure, Gillena 🙂

      much love….❤️

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