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Travelling through the tunnel of time;
Pondering upon its measure, design.
Letting the voice of reason chime;
Travelling through the tunnel of time.

Like hands of Nature adorn our prime;
In swirls of doubt, offer a sign.
Travelling through the tunnel of time;
Pondering upon its measure, design.

 

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Form: Triolet

Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United

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Comments

  1. Mary says:

    There is so much for a person to ponder as they move through the tunnel of time! Each person’s journey definitely has its own design…

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  2. Old Egg says:

    Time is such a precious gift that we mustn’t hide it away but use it everyday.

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  3. Alan Stevens says:

    I love the way it makes you feel captured in a vault of time, almost tangible presence with this.

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  4. Sumana Roy says:

    This beautiful triolet of time travel has the motion of a smooth sail…”Pondering upon its measure, design. / Letting the voice of reason chime;” make it all the more enjoyable…

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  5. vandana says:

    Amazing!! poem and again I see a new style of the poem, the repetition of a particular line adds so much of beauty!!

    Whole life is what but a time spent and whenever in doubt or difficult nature does gives a sign.

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  6. gillena says:

    Time is definitely a dynamic force; luv your repetitive form
    Have a nice Wednesday

    Much love…

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  7. Jae Rose says:

    I love the pattern in this beautiful poem…like time itself it flows in a loop…

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  8. A nice pattern of repetition!

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  9. Susan says:

    We are time travelers whether or not we ever leave our own time and it is part of our health that we think, ponder, question. Lovely. This poem’s simplicity hides its complexity. Bravo!

    I’m wondering why your site doesn’t retain my login info? Each time I have to fill out the form anew. No problem, I just wonder.

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  10. We can really never measure or fathom the design of time…A wonderful poem that makes you think about the enigma called Time πŸ™‚

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  11. I love the rhythm, rhyme and meter of this poem, very much. Love the “tunnel of time” analogy.

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  12. blogoratti says:

    Great rhyming pattern and message indeed, time is everything. Well done. Enjoy the rest of the week, take care!

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  13. Myrna says:

    That tunnel winds in so many directions. It is good to ponder it, to learn from it and to keep going in it. Good write Sanaa.

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  14. Claire says:

    I think you’ve captured our movement through time really well here πŸ™‚

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  15. L. Moon says:

    The triolet worked nicely in keeping time for your verse Sanaa. I like the symbol of the tunnel- does it contain constrain or direct?
    Well plotted journey. Also loved the visual – makes the poem.
    XO

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  16. Sanaa,
    The image helps to give depth to your poem..Destiny lies ahead; one-way only…and bound by time.

    Eileen

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  17. Thotpurge says:

    Nice Triolet and the picture is lovely!

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  18. Magyar says:

    Time taunts; time tempts us to that tangle; time tampers

    Seems we’re all thinking of time… lately, Smiles_! _m

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  19. kaykuala h says:

    Pondering and racing against it is always a favorite pastime! A time tunnel makes it mysterious! Wonderful lines Sanaa!

    Hank

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  20. Rall says:

    Like the triolet form….suits the rhythm of relentless time. Well done !

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  21. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder says:

    Loved the rhyming pattern in it…profound words, too… πŸ™‚

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  22. Kim Nelson says:

    And that tunnel takes us on an amazing journey. One never knows what is just beyond the horizon or around the next curve.

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  23. G L Meisner says:

    This is really a thought provoker. Well written.

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  24. Vincent says:

    “In swirls of doubt, offer a sign.”
    This is a great line, doubt is undoubtedly like a whirlpool and once you get caught up in it it’s hard to get out.

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  25. Nicholas V. says:

    Ah! When I was young I lived watching a program called “The Time Tunnel” – it is indeed a great image. Nice one.

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  26. Bjorn says:

    I love a triolet, and with the sounds of wheels the repetions get even better.

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  27. Kim Nelson says:

    The beauty of traveling through that tunnel is this: Every mile/kilometer is an opportunity to learn, to grow, to love.

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  28. 2nd line gave me the shivers… Beautiful work!

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  29. Marian says:

    Ah, time triolet. Lovely reflection–

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  30. I love the image of a time tunnel… I always think of time as a spiral and your concept feels akin. Beautifully written.

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  31. Susmit says:

    This is so moving, succint yet insightful….Loved it.

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