In one fleeting moment;
The Sun caressed the sparkling blue sea.
Rowing across, the oars kissed ripples of hope;
As we stare in awe at the wonders of this Earth.
The Sun caressed the sparkling blue sea;
Feel the warmth upon your skin.
As we stare in awe at the wonders of this Earth;
Echo each thought in Nature surround.
Feel the warmth upon your skin;
Rowing across, the oars kissed ripples of hope.
Echo each thought in Nature surround;
In one fleeting moment.
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Posted for Herotomost’s Challenge @ Real Toads.
Nature is a beautiful thing indeed, and that photo is apt. How are you, hope your week is going very well!
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The echo is so appropriate to use for this cave prompted piece…beautifully written, Sanaa.
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What a stunning photo. And this form intrigues me…what is it??? I like its progression….adding one new line each time…
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What a wonderful image.. sounds like such a wonderful place to be.. I would like to swim in that water.
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The lines in repetition really made it meditative for me. What form did you use to write this poem?
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The sea is so alive and gives great inspiration. This is lovely with a sweet touch of romance as the sun sets on (another poem)
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Interesting, send me that email too! I must know! 🙂
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Man…that is the cave I want to be in…lol!!! The repeating lines made the foundation for this poem so solid. It matched the feeling I got when I saw that picture perfectly. It was like coming down and sitting by the ocean, the relaxation tools over. Great writing, thanks!
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Yours is a beautiful cave! (In words and image.)
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The beauty….always mesmerizing and our thoughts unleash.
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I enjoyed your fleeting, poetic moment very much. ♥
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Can’t quite place the form–a sort of shortened villanelle, I suppose–anyway–the word ‘sparkling’ reflects through and through here.
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___It seems humans always intrude in nature’s plan, but… in this photo they are one:. “In one fleeting moment”. __Grand photo and poeticism. _m
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Wonderful, lyrical imagery: “….the oars kissed ripples of hope”. Lovely.
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You bring a very positive emotion to the subject of caves.
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On a cloudy day, I have seen the sun literally skip across the water – the image here is splendid – the moment the sun “kisses” you with its touch, Ripples of water are almost as mesmerizing.
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Blessings….
It’s why everyday is a blessings, even if its tainted with sore moments.
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This is just beautiful. I love the sun, the kisses, the caresses, the blue skin of the sea. What a delightful new form you’ve chosen for this prompt.
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