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In one fleeting moment;
The Sun caressed the sparkling blue sea.
Rowing across, the oars kissed ripples of hope;
As we stare in awe at the wonders of this Earth.

The Sun caressed the sparkling blue sea;
Feel the warmth upon your skin.
As we stare in awe at the wonders of this Earth;
Echo each thought in Nature surround.

Feel the warmth upon your skin;
Rowing across, the oars kissed ripples of hope.
Echo each thought in Nature surround;
In one fleeting moment.

 

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Posted for Herotomost’s Challenge @ Real Toads.

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  1. blogoratti says:

    Nature is a beautiful thing indeed, and that photo is apt. How are you, hope your week is going very well!

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  2. The echo is so appropriate to use for this cave prompted piece…beautifully written, Sanaa.

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  3. What a stunning photo. And this form intrigues me…what is it??? I like its progression….adding one new line each time…

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  4. Bjorn says:

    What a wonderful image.. sounds like such a wonderful place to be.. I would like to swim in that water.

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  5. The lines in repetition really made it meditative for me. What form did you use to write this poem?

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  6. Leslie Moon says:

    The sea is so alive and gives great inspiration. This is lovely with a sweet touch of romance as the sun sets on (another poem)

    xxoo

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  7. Marian says:

    Interesting, send me that email too! I must know! 🙂

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  8. herotomost says:

    Man…that is the cave I want to be in…lol!!! The repeating lines made the foundation for this poem so solid. It matched the feeling I got when I saw that picture perfectly. It was like coming down and sitting by the ocean, the relaxation tools over. Great writing, thanks!

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  9. Yours is a beautiful cave! (In words and image.)

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  10. vandana says:

    The beauty….always mesmerizing and our thoughts unleash.

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  11. jinksy says:

    I enjoyed your fleeting, poetic moment very much. ♥

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  12. hedgewitch says:

    Can’t quite place the form–a sort of shortened villanelle, I suppose–anyway–the word ‘sparkling’ reflects through and through here.

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  13. magyar says:

    ___It seems humans always intrude in nature’s plan, but… in this photo they are one:. “In one fleeting moment”. __Grand photo and poeticism. _m

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  14. Steve Goetz says:

    Wonderful, lyrical imagery: “….the oars kissed ripples of hope”. Lovely.

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  15. Kerry O'Connor says:

    You bring a very positive emotion to the subject of caves.

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  16. Margaret says:

    On a cloudy day, I have seen the sun literally skip across the water – the image here is splendid – the moment the sun “kisses” you with its touch, Ripples of water are almost as mesmerizing.

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  17. Rhapsody says:

    Blessings….
    It’s why everyday is a blessings, even if its tainted with sore moments.

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  18. angie says:

    This is just beautiful. I love the sun, the kisses, the caresses, the blue skin of the sea. What a delightful new form you’ve chosen for this prompt.

    1. adashofsunny says:

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