Photo credits: Hdwallpaperpc
Posted for ‘Poetics’ @ dVerse Poets Pub
and Monday Writes @ My Blog – Verses
and on ‘Tuesday Platform’ @ Real Toads
Photo credits: Hdwallpaperpc
58 Responses
Love this… so short and sweet… and sour lips needs saccharine
Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Love a good revisit… 🙂 also like the fuchsia morn.
Thanks for stopping by, Bjorn 😀
Oh, I love that “fuchsia morn,” especially!
Thank you so much, De 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
So much in so few words. Wonderful piece of writing .. lips somewhat sour ..unfurl like petals. Brilliant!
Aw!❤️ Thank you so much, Paul 😀 so nice to see you!❤️
wow…so sensual…wonderfully evocative poem.
Thank you so much, Paul 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Oh, drink me in! Lovely verse, really The picture embodies it too
Aww!❤️ Thank you so much, Eric 😀 so nice to see you ❤️
Lovely, sensual, personal–right on. Nice dip into cool brevity & saunter beyond the darkness of days.
Thank you so much, Glenn 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
stirred as though potpourri of verse……..LOVELY image!
I enjoyed this one very much, Sanaa.
Aw!❤️ Thank you so much, Lillian 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Very sensual, even with the twist of sweet and sour. Always lovely! 🙂
Thank you so much, Barbara 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Nice sensuous sounding poem. You got the first two words from the list right at the beginning. I liked the sour lips and sweet touch.
Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so nice to see you ❤️
Very nice. I was particularly grabbed by ‘as though potpourri of verse’.
Thank you so much, Janice 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
It sounds to me like she was seduced by lies and bad wine. A good use of the prompt.
It could be that. Thanks for stopping by, Walter 🙂
I love the fuschia morn…lovely.
Thank you so much, Toni 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
This reads so sensual. Well done. 🙂
Thank you so much, Arcadia Maria 😀 so nice to see you ❤️
This is a lovely write, lips may be sour, but a bit of sugar goes a long way 🙂
Thank you so much, Truedessa 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Great response to the prompt; sensual and intimate…love it!
Thank you so much, Kathy 😀 so nice to see you ❤️
Oh Lord.. other
than the fake
taste/news
of saccharine
spoiLing the
loveLY
wine
oF sugar
bliss.. i’Ve
reAlly misSed
your poetry.. Sanaa..
thanks so much for it..
and.. so nice to see you again..:)
Thank you so much, Katie 😀 good to see you too! ❤️
oh my, this poem is gorgeous!
evoked many mental images.
Thank you so much, Stacy 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
‘potpourri of verse’ – that sounds wonderful indeed
Thank you so much, Vidya 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Woo-hoo!
Thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Lovely!
Thank you so much, Annell 😀 so nice to see you!❤️
Sanaa
I am definitely a dawn person, so I Luv the image of
“fuchsia morn’s lured”
Thanks for linking to Monday WRites
Much love…
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Much love…❤️
Such a romantic unfurling of petals, Sanaa. I love the ‘potpourri of verse’ and the saccharine touch.
Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
I’m seduced by the words that flow in this poem, a beautiful write 🙂
Thank you so much, Vandana 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
An interesting contrast between the sweet and sour in this relationship.
Thank you so much, Kerry 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
A “potpourri of verse”. How delicious, Sanaa. Especially when followed by lips.
Thank you so much, Magaly 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Delicate, intimate, delicious.
Thank you so much, Paul 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
Potpourri of verse is gorgeous…
Thank you so much, Rajani 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
Gorgeous….sensual!!
Thank you so much, Sreeja 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️