February 8, 2017 | 58 Comments Photo credits:Β Hdwallpaperpc Posted for ‘Poetics’ @ dVerse Poets Pub and Monday Writes @ My Blog – Verses and on ‘Tuesday Platform’ @ Real Toads
So much in so few words. Wonderful piece of writing .. lips somewhat sour ..unfurl like petals. Brilliant! Reply
Lovely, sensual, personal–right on. Nice dip into cool brevity & saunter beyond the darkness of days. Reply
Nice sensuous sounding poem. You got the first two words from the list right at the beginning. I liked the sour lips and sweet touch. Reply
Oh Lord.. other than the fake taste/news of saccharine spoiLing the loveLY wine oF sugar bliss.. i’Ve reAlly misSed your poetry.. Sanaa.. thanks so much for it.. and.. so nice to see you again..:) Reply
Sanaa I am definitely a dawn person, so I Luv the image of “fuchsia morn’s lured” Thanks for linking to Monday WRites Much love… Reply
Such a romantic unfurling of petals, Sanaa. I love the ‘potpourri of verse’ and the saccharine touch. Reply
Love this… so short and sweet… and sour lips needs saccharine
Thank you so much, Bjorn π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
Love a good revisit… π also like the fuchsia morn.
Thanks for stopping by, Bjorn π
Oh, I love that “fuchsia morn,” especially!
Thank you so much, De π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
So much in so few words. Wonderful piece of writing .. lips somewhat sour ..unfurl like petals. Brilliant!
Aw!β€οΈ Thank you so much, Paul π so nice to see you!β€οΈ
wow…so sensual…wonderfully evocative poem.
Thank you so much, Paul π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
Oh, drink me in! Lovely verse, really The picture embodies it too
Aww!β€οΈ Thank you so much, Eric π so nice to see you β€οΈ
Lovely, sensual, personal–right on. Nice dip into cool brevity & saunter beyond the darkness of days.
Thank you so much, Glenn π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
stirred as though potpourri of verse……..LOVELY image!
I enjoyed this one very much, Sanaa.
Aw!β€οΈ Thank you so much, Lillian π so glad you enjoyed it β€οΈ
Very sensual, even with the twist of sweet and sour. Always lovely! π
Thank you so much, Barbara π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
Nice sensuous sounding poem. You got the first two words from the list right at the beginning. I liked the sour lips and sweet touch.
Thank you so much, Frank π so nice to see you β€οΈ
Very nice. I was particularly grabbed by ‘as though potpourri of verse’.
Thank you so much, Janice π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
It sounds to me like she was seduced by lies and bad wine. A good use of the prompt.
It could be that. Thanks for stopping by, Walter π
I love the fuschia morn…lovely.
Thank you so much, Toni π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
This reads so sensual. Well done. π
Thank you so much, Arcadia Maria π so nice to see you β€οΈ
This is a lovely write, lips may be sour, but a bit of sugar goes a long way π
Thank you so much, Truedessa π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
Great response to the prompt; sensual and intimate…love it!
Thank you so much, Kathy π so nice to see you β€οΈ
Oh Lord.. other
than the fake
taste/news
of saccharine
spoiLing the
loveLY
wine
oF sugar
bliss.. i’Ve
reAlly misSed
your poetry.. Sanaa..
thanks so much for it..
and.. so nice to see you again..:)
Thank you so much, Katie π good to see you too! β€οΈ
oh my, this poem is gorgeous!
evoked many mental images.
Thank you so much, Stacy π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
‘potpourri of verse’ – that sounds wonderful indeed
Thank you so much, Vidya π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
Woo-hoo!
Thank you so much, Rosemary π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
Lovely!
Thank you so much, Annell π so nice to see you!β€οΈ
Sanaa
I am definitely a dawn person, so I Luv the image of
“fuchsia morn’s lured”
Thanks for linking to Monday WRites
Much love…
Thank you so much, Gillena π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
Much love…β€οΈ
Such a romantic unfurling of petals, Sanaa. I love the ‘potpourri of verse’ and the saccharine touch.
Thank you so much, Kim π so glad you enjoyed it β€οΈ
I’m seduced by the words that flow in this poem, a beautiful write π
Thank you so much, Vandana π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
An interesting contrast between the sweet and sour in this relationship.
Thank you so much, Kerry π so good to see you β€οΈ
A “potpourri of verse”. How delicious, Sanaa. Especially when followed by lips.
Thank you so much, Magaly π so glad you enjoyed it β€οΈ
Delicate, intimate, delicious.
Thank you so much, Paul π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
Potpourri of verse is gorgeous…
Thank you so much, Rajani π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
Gorgeous….sensual!!
Thank you so much, Sreeja π so glad you liked it β€οΈ