Comments

  1. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    Love this… so short and sweet… and sour lips needs saccharine

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

      1. Bjorn Rudberg says:

        Love a good revisit… 🙂 also like the fuchsia morn.

        1. Sanaa says:

          Thanks for stopping by, Bjorn 😀

  2. De Jackson says:

    Oh, I love that “fuchsia morn,” especially!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, De 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  3. So much in so few words. Wonderful piece of writing .. lips somewhat sour ..unfurl like petals. Brilliant!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aw!❤️ Thank you so much, Paul 😀 so nice to see you!❤️

  4. paul scribbles says:

    wow…so sensual…wonderfully evocative poem.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Paul 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  5. Erbiage says:

    Oh, drink me in! Lovely verse, really The picture embodies it too

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww!❤️ Thank you so much, Eric 😀 so nice to see you ❤️

  6. Lovely, sensual, personal–right on. Nice dip into cool brevity & saunter beyond the darkness of days.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Glenn 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  7. lillian says:

    stirred as though potpourri of verse……..LOVELY image!
    I enjoyed this one very much, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aw!❤️ Thank you so much, Lillian 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  8. barbara says:

    Very sensual, even with the twist of sweet and sour. Always lovely! 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Barbara 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  9. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice sensuous sounding poem. You got the first two words from the list right at the beginning. I liked the sour lips and sweet touch.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so nice to see you ❤️

  10. Janice says:

    Very nice. I was particularly grabbed by ‘as though potpourri of verse’.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Janice 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  11. Walter Marks says:

    It sounds to me like she was seduced by lies and bad wine. A good use of the prompt.

    1. Sanaa says:

      It could be that. Thanks for stopping by, Walter 🙂

  12. kanzensakura says:

    I love the fuschia morn…lovely.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Toni 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  13. This reads so sensual. Well done. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Arcadia Maria 😀 so nice to see you ❤️

  14. Truedessa says:

    This is a lovely write, lips may be sour, but a bit of sugar goes a long way 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Truedessa 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  15. Kathy Reed says:

    Great response to the prompt; sensual and intimate…love it!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kathy 😀 so nice to see you ❤️

  16. Oh Lord.. other
    than the fake
    taste/news
    of saccharine
    spoiLing the
    loveLY
    wine
    oF sugar
    bliss.. i’Ve
    reAlly misSed
    your poetry.. Sanaa..
    thanks so much for it..
    and.. so nice to see you again..:)

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Katie 😀 good to see you too! ❤️

  17. oh my, this poem is gorgeous!
    evoked many mental images.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Stacy 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  18. LadyInRead says:

    ‘potpourri of verse’ – that sounds wonderful indeed

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Vidya 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Annell 😀 so nice to see you!❤️

  19. gillena says:

    Sanaa
    I am definitely a dawn person, so I Luv the image of

    “fuchsia morn’s lured”

    Thanks for linking to Monday WRites

    Much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

      Much love…❤️

  20. Such a romantic unfurling of petals, Sanaa. I love the ‘potpourri of verse’ and the saccharine touch.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  21. vandana says:

    I’m seduced by the words that flow in this poem, a beautiful write 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Vandana 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  22. Kerry says:

    An interesting contrast between the sweet and sour in this relationship.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry 🙂 so good to see you ❤️

  23. A “potpourri of verse”. How delicious, Sanaa. Especially when followed by lips.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Magaly 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  24. Paul says:

    Delicate, intimate, delicious.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Paul 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  25. Thotpurge says:

    Potpourri of verse is gorgeous…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rajani 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  26. Gorgeous….sensual!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sreeja 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

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