I Weep (Not)

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It seems as though with passage
of blooming years, my tears have
dried, surging o’ heart with cheer.
You are sunshine gold streaming
past porpoise skies ―

I weep not nor hold dear inward
moan, you are hope o’ belief as
roses succeed showers of snow.
In euphonious tones, our souls
(afire) now breathe as one.

 

 

Photo credits: One HD Wallpaper

(Tribute to my closest friend Aqsa Siddiqui.)

Posted for Flash 55 Plus @ Real Toads

also for Poetry Pantry @ Poets United

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Comments

  1. Wow, beautiful. I especially love, “I weep not nor hold dear inward moan.” Can feel both the intensity and maturity in it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sreejit 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  2. Kerry O'Connor says:

    How lovely, Sanaa. There is strength in endurance.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  3. Thotpurge says:

    Love the porpoise skies!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rajani 😀 good to see you ❤️

  4. I’m breathing in the hope that sparkles out of your second stanza. So needed right now.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Magaly 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  5. Margaret says:

    Friendship, love … after everything we go through its that “holding close” of what matters that makes life rich…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Margaret 😀

  6. Old Egg says:

    “Our souls (afire) breathe as one” What a beautiful tribute Sanaa and how moving it is.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Robin 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  7. kaykuala h says:

    In euphonious tones, our souls
    (afire) now breathe as one

    At least there is the final consequence of getting together ‘as one’

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Hank 😀

  8. HA says:

    Ah! This maturity comes with the experience of what all life entails and in the end, the tears perhaps have to be kept hidden. And when souls breathe as one, I don’t think that anyone could ever want more than that.
    A thoughtfully written verse. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aw!❤️ thank you for such a kind and thoughtful comment, Anmol 😀 so nice to see you ❤️

  9. I don’t know how you keep coming up with such freshly gorgeous lines.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww!❤️ thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  10. gillena says:

    “I weep not nor hold dear inward
    moan, ”

    Luv this, its loaded with the good medicine of inspiration and maturity

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

      Much love…❤️

  11. Rommy says:

    The rebirth of hope often is helpful for drying one’s tears.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Rommy ❤️

  12. ayala says:

    Beautifully penned!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Ayala!❤️

  13. Marian says:

    Porpoise skies! Wow!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Marian 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  14. “You are sunshine gold streaming past porpoise skies.” What an incredible line that Is!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  15. Bev says:

    …roses succeed showers of snow … What a lovely, hopeful thought!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bev 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  16. annell4 says:

    A beautiful collection of words, as if fished from a sunny sea.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww!!❤️ Thank you so much, Annell 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  17. CC says:

    I like “euphonious tones”–has such a gentle ring to it 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, C.C 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  18. grapeling says:

    I have learned that to weep is now natural ~

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Michael 😀

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Hedgewitch 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  19. A blue version of gold and romance. I love the porpoise sky.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Colleen 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  20. Ellecee says:

    A beautiful tribute to a friend – one I’m sure they appreciated very much. I especially like “you are hope o’belief as roses succeed showers of snow”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  21. Candy says:

    The ending just made me sigh

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Candy 😀 so good to see you!❤️

  22. Mary says:

    This is very seductively romantic. Swooooon!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Mary 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  23. Wendy Bourke says:

    Lovely. ‘In euphonious tones, our souls (afire) now breathe as one.’ … as soothing as a hush.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Wendy 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  24. you write so beautifully–here is my favorite line–

    you are hope o’ belief as
    roses succeed showers of snow.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww!❤️ Thank you so much, Audrey 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  25. Sara McNulty says:

    I love the idea of souls breathing as one. There is hope singing through this.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sara 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  26. Elizabeth says:

    I also like the porpoise sky, and your final verse.

    Elizabeth

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Elizabeth 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  27. dsnake1 says:

    simply gorgeous!
    masterful use of language! 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Dsnake 🙂 so nice to see you! ❤️

  28. Anusha Das says:

    I am awestuck by your style of poetry each time.Just superb

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Anusha 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  29. Magical Mystical Teacher says:

    There’s nothing finer than two souls breathing as one.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Most definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, MMT 😀

  30. gillena says:

    Sanaa thanks for your continued support,
    happy you linked up at Monday WRites

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      My pleasure ❤️ good to see you too, Gillena 😀

      Much love… ❤️

  31. Wow! I love this, Sanaa. ❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Josslyn 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

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