The winter winds had wrapped my soul;
Took a chance when things were unclear.
To home plate we took but a stroll;
We spoke no louder than a whisper.
You are my life, my love and heart;
I willed myself to say these words.
Whether work together or far apart;
Hand in hand as light as birds.
And suddenly time just ceased – it stopped
He looked at me like never before.
I stared in awe my jaw had dropped;
He whispered now and evermore.
Perhaps there is magic far above;
For heaven itself descends in love.
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As above so below..
Heaven’s kiss
so far
so
close
alive as
well.. a
sCent.. of Air..:)
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Amazing how you can be struck with love like that, like strings resonating together..
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Still magic 🙂
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This leaves me wondering if this isn’t based in reality- it seems like something that most of us have experienced or would like to experience. Nicely done.
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This is really pretty. I like it very much. And my goodness, you always choose the most mesmerizing artwork to accompany your pieces.
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Such a lovely scene, both people in the same wavelength ~ I love it when heaven descends itself on love ~ Thanks for your lovely poem Sanaa and wishing you happy week ~
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How beautiful it is to be in love! 🙂
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Heaven, and indeed love, can be found in those strolls to home plate…. well done.
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Ah, the words — now and forevermore — what music to one’s lips. There is nothing that surpasses the magic of love.
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Magical things can happen, especially in the hearts of those with love for each other…I have no doubt.
Gayle ~
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How magical it is indeed when heaven descends and love throws you a home run pitch. Very sweet and romantic.
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Life is all about moments like that!
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Sometimes it pays to say (even if we whisper) our thoughts out loud… A lovely, loving piece about the power of love.
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Sigh… so lovely.
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A truly romantic poem – not schmaltzy, just lovely.
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This is WONDERFUL and his response was perfection!
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So romantic!
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How lovely, Sanaa. You write a beautiful sonnet.
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well-crafted sonnet!
and such lovely and romantic lines. 🙂
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The whole poem is wonderful, but I particularly love the second stanza–it reads like a gasp that so many of us has tasted… ♥
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Goosebumps as I read this…my heart was fluttering as I felt the excitement…such a wonderful story and the ending lines are pure bliss…such truth:
‘Perhaps there is magic far above;
For heaven itself descends in love.’
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ah…the couplet perfectly sums up love…divine it is…beautiful Sanaa….
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Sounds like love has found a way…very romantic.
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One could not have a better response than that…….so wonderful!
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Love does come from somewhere?
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“Perhaps there is magic far above;
For heaven itself descends in love.”
my favouite lines Sanaa
Thank you for linking in to my Sunday Lime
much love…
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Oh, this is a beautiful love poem, Sanaa. I like the last line & agree with you — sometimes heaven does descend in love. (I am glad this is based on truth for you.)
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Your words give the photo a life of its own.
Elizabeth
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You been a lucky girl then Sanaa! What a beautiful and romantic poem this is.
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Love on such a scale suspends time and being – and is indeed truly magical..and breathless…
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What a lovely transcendent moment – captured beautifully in the sonnet form.
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