In the rich, warm and velvet abundant
night, I sought to reach out and touch
droplets of rain which hung from your
lashes. Believe fervor is thorn as virtue
is roses red dripping upon the floor as
your voice burns into a restless mind.
Photo credits: Pinterest
Posted for ‘Quadrille #57′ @ dVerse Pub
and on ‘Tuesday Platform’ @ Real Toads
56 Responses
Beautifully done! The metaphorical play was a joy to read… and see.
Thank you so much, Charley 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Abundant night! Great descriptor. Love this poem.
Thank you so much, Jilly 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Romantic rain! Beautiful, Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
(and thank you for the lovely prompt)
Beautiful!
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Nice idea of the burning voice in a restless mind.
Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so good to see you ❤️
This is very rich…from the words to the image. I love this ‘…droplets of rain which hung from your
lashes…”
Thank you so much, Vivian 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
‘velvet abundant night” – great phrase!
Thank you so much, Jo 😀 so good to see you ❤️
I thought the ending: your voice burns into a restless mind- begs for a passionate response ~
Thank you so much, Grace 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Wonderful picture of raindrops hanging from lashes
Thank you so much, Walter 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Rich, warm, velvet abundant night….I felt wrapped in it as I read this. Beautiful!
Thank you so much, Mary 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Great Poem… Rain comes in many forms!
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Dwight ❤️
The rain from the lashes looks so much like tears.
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Bjorn ❤️
velvet abundant night is a vivid image!
Thank you so much, Rajani 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
WOW!!! clever write and the team up image; a perfect package.
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Sanaa; thanks for your continued support, linking to Monday WRites
much love…
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Much🌹love
Love the emotion of your quadrille, conveyed in gorgeous imagery!
Thank you so much, Lynn 😀 so good to see you ❤️
This line is so rich in both language and imagery:
Believe fervor is thorn as virtue
is roses red dripping upon the floor
Thank you so much, De 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
lovely romantic write…
Thank you so much, Robert 😀 so good to see you ❤️
This is packed with beautiful imagery Sanaa! Simply amazing!
Thank you so much, Carrie 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
The restless mind, the tears hung from lashes… beautifully rich images.
Thank you so much, Toni 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
‘Believe fervor is thorn as virtue is roses red’.. oh my this is gorgeous! 💙
Thank you so much, Sameera 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
This is rich in tone and lush in its original imagery, Sanaa! The image of virtue dripping as red roses is particularly striking 🙂
Thank you so much, Chris 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Roses red dripping; the syntax throughout conveys the tone.
Thank you so much, D.Avery 😀 so good to see you ❤️
This is so unbelievably romantic, Sanaa!
❤️💛💜
Love the image of virtue dripping as red roses! 😀
Thank you so much, Cara 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Love the visual of rain dangling from eyelashes. Beautiful, Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Mish 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Sumptuous portrayal of an intense longing. Such poetic calibre.
Thank you so much, Colin 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Virtue to savor but be slow with the ferver. A wise choice though hard to be in a hot romance.
I didn’t fall and wasn’t in an accident, I just have brittle bones. Thanks, Sanaa, for your cheerful words.
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Thank you so much, Jim 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
The art posted here matches the fervor of your words.
Thank you so much, Sara 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️