Memories

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Blissful memories;
Tangled knots.
Time has passed;
Running fast.
Look into mirror;
Tears flowing.
Hope and regrets;
Guidance through,
We shall survive.
I promise you.

You, I promise
Survive shall we.
Through guidance.
Regrets and hope;
Flowing tears.
Mirror into look;
Fast running,
Passed has time.
Knots tangled,
Memories blissful.

 

Photo credits: www.imgbucket.com

Form: Palindrome

Posted on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads

Comments

  1. Mary says:

    With all of the memories, I really hope the relationship will survive…even though there are some regrets to be overcome. You really did a good job with writing a palindrome poem! Smiles.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  2. Gabriella says:

    How nice that you wrote a palindrome too, Sanaa! I like what you did even though to me the second stanza feels less positive than the first as it ends on memories while the first one ends with a promise.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gabriella,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, have a nice weekend!
      xoxo

  3. Gillena Cox says:

    Like the verso form of the second verse, quite an interesting write

    Much love…

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  4. Leo says:

    Another lovely palindrome. 🙂 Just been to Mary’s.

    Loved these lines:

    Tears flowing.
    Hope and regrets;
    Guidance through,
    We shall survive.
    I promise you.

    I liked the first verse better. It felt more in flow. 🙂

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Vinay,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a nice week 🙂

  5. gillena says:

    Have a nice Tuesday Sanaa, thanks for dropping in to read my and leaving your nice comment

    much love…

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, have a nice week ahead!
      xoxo

  6. Bjorn says:

    What a great palindrome.. and just like Mary said, the reverse version turns so less hopeful.. alas how many relationships end. 🙂

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciate your kind words 🙂

  7. kaykuala h says:

    Great palindrome Sanaa! Given the setting and the forceful image, the two are going places certainly!

    Hank

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Hank,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, have a nice week ahead!

  8. Vandana says:

    Oh!! wow this is beautiful, I guess I missed it over poet dverse but happy to catch it here!! Great palindrome with emotions intact.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Vandana,

      Thank you so much dear, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  9. I like the idea of some memories being like tangled knots. Crying is for sadness and joy!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Colleen,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, have a nice week ahead.
      xoxo

  10. Yay, a palindrome and so well done. You capture the tears and joys of a relationship so well. Very cool banner photo……is that the city where you live?

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

      PS: No, its a random location, thought it would look cool with the poem 🙂

  11. Kerry O'Connor says:

    I love the optimism of your work.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Kerry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  12. I love the hopefulness and promise of this, was wonderful.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Moskowitz,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, so good to see you 🙂

  13. What an amazing look into a reflective pool 🙂 Well done!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rose,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  14. Rall says:

    Palindrome poems are difficult to write . Well done !

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rall,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, have a wonderful week.
      xoxo

  15. CC says:

    Palindromes are difficult to accomplish seamlessly and you did it beautifully here.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello C.C

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  16. Difficult to write in this form?? You make it look easy, although I doubt that is the case–beautifully done

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Audrey,

      Thank you so much dear, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  17. Yes, you make the form seem easy. Life mold us with memories…some beautiful, some sad. But we make it through.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Susie,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  18. I see you too had the urge to try another palindrome. 🙂 I like the way you’ve done it, not only reversing the lines but also the words, in a way that makes sense,.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

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