Blissful memories;
Tangled knots.
Time has passed;
Running fast.
Look into mirror;
Tears flowing.
Hope and regrets;
Guidance through,
We shall survive.
I promise you.
You, I promise
Survive shall we.
Through guidance.
Regrets and hope;
Flowing tears.
Mirror into look;
Fast running,
Passed has time.
Knots tangled,
Memories blissful.
Photo credits: www.imgbucket.com
Form: Palindrome
With all of the memories, I really hope the relationship will survive…even though there are some regrets to be overcome. You really did a good job with writing a palindrome poem! Smiles.
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How nice that you wrote a palindrome too, Sanaa! I like what you did even though to me the second stanza feels less positive than the first as it ends on memories while the first one ends with a promise.
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Like the verso form of the second verse, quite an interesting write
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Another lovely palindrome. 🙂 Just been to Mary’s.
Loved these lines:
Tears flowing.
Hope and regrets;
Guidance through,
We shall survive.
I promise you.
I liked the first verse better. It felt more in flow. 🙂
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Have a nice Tuesday Sanaa, thanks for dropping in to read my and leaving your nice comment
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What a great palindrome.. and just like Mary said, the reverse version turns so less hopeful.. alas how many relationships end. 🙂
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Great palindrome Sanaa! Given the setting and the forceful image, the two are going places certainly!
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Oh!! wow this is beautiful, I guess I missed it over poet dverse but happy to catch it here!! Great palindrome with emotions intact.
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I like the idea of some memories being like tangled knots. Crying is for sadness and joy!
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Yay, a palindrome and so well done. You capture the tears and joys of a relationship so well. Very cool banner photo……is that the city where you live?
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I love the optimism of your work.
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I love the hopefulness and promise of this, was wonderful.
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What an amazing look into a reflective pool 🙂 Well done!
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Palindrome poems are difficult to write . Well done !
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Palindromes are difficult to accomplish seamlessly and you did it beautifully here.
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Difficult to write in this form?? You make it look easy, although I doubt that is the case–beautifully done
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Yes, you make the form seem easy. Life mold us with memories…some beautiful, some sad. But we make it through.
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I see you too had the urge to try another palindrome. 🙂 I like the way you’ve done it, not only reversing the lines but also the words, in a way that makes sense,.
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