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  1. Joy says:

    interesting haiku- poetry!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Joy,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated!
      xoxo

  2. blogoratti says:

    Great piece, and imagery!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Blogoratti,

      Thank you Sir πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated!

  3. annell4 says:

    Yes, smoke can make you choke!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Annell,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated!
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  4. L. Moon says:

    now that would be good for a smoking commercial – choke choke

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Leslie,

      Lol I dare say it would be πŸ˜€
      So glad you liked it.
      Highly appreciated πŸ˜€

      xoxo

  5. Wow! Bold sensuality in such few words. Cigarette smoke normally makes me cough, but this piece makes it sexy. πŸ™‚

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Susie,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      That was the general idea πŸ˜‰
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      xoxo

  6. Ironic!

    I am so glad to have stopped smoking (in 1987).

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you so much! So glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Oh cool its nice that you did πŸ™‚
      Lots of love πŸ˜€
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  7. vandana says:

    First I was astonished with the image and then with an equally astonishing haiku!! πŸ™‚

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Vandana,

      Thank you so much for such a sweet compliment πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ˜€
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  8. The choke is a good reason not to smoke.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Have a great week ahead!

  9. gillena says:

    if you left out the word of in Line 2 you get a perfect neoclassical 5.7.5 haiku

    really nice

    much love…

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Oh that sounds nice πŸ™‚ I ll do it thanks πŸ˜€
      So glad you liked it! Lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  10. quite true! but as an ex-smoker, i still want a cigarette….

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Dani,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
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  11. Kerry O'Connor says:

    Nice one, Sanaa.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Kerry,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  12. Beautiful… perfect with the imagery!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Laura,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚
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  13. Jim says:

    Nice, Sanaa, I am still smiling πŸ™‚
    Nice Haiku. Do write SenryΕ«? I call my Haiku that aren’t about nature or seasons SenryΕ«. Most Haiku sites don’t blink an eye when I call them that.
    Its nice that we both posted a smoke theme. Mine is almost archaic, I wrote it in 2009 back when OSI was active.
    ..

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Jim,

      Thank you so much. I am still in the process of learning πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚

  14. Manicddaily says:

    Cool pic–yikes! The mirage of coolness then choking (all going up in smoke!) Thanks.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Manicddaily,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  15. Rall says:

    Cool pic. Dying of lung cancer is not cool…a painful and undignified death. Choke is right !

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rall,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked the haiku πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  16. Susmit says:

    What a way to sensitize, an absolute marvel! Brand Managers are watching out…..

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Susmit,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated! Have a great week!

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