Nice, Sanaa, I am still smiling π
Nice Haiku. Do write SenryΕ«? I call my Haiku that aren’t about nature or seasons SenryΕ«. Most Haiku sites don’t blink an eye when I call them that.
Its nice that we both posted a smoke theme. Mine is almost archaic, I wrote it in 2009 back when OSI was active.
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interesting haiku- poetry!
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Great piece, and imagery!
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Yes, smoke can make you choke!
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now that would be good for a smoking commercial – choke choke
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Lol I dare say it would be π
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Wow! Bold sensuality in such few words. Cigarette smoke normally makes me cough, but this piece makes it sexy. π
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That was the general idea π
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Ironic!
I am so glad to have stopped smoking (in 1987).
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Oh cool its nice that you did π
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First I was astonished with the image and then with an equally astonishing haiku!! π
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The choke is a good reason not to smoke.
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if you left out the word of in Line 2 you get a perfect neoclassical 5.7.5 haiku
really nice
much love…
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quite true! but as an ex-smoker, i still want a cigarette….
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Nice one, Sanaa.
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Beautiful⦠perfect with the imagery!
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Nice, Sanaa, I am still smiling π
Nice Haiku. Do write SenryΕ«? I call my Haiku that aren’t about nature or seasons SenryΕ«. Most Haiku sites don’t blink an eye when I call them that.
Its nice that we both posted a smoke theme. Mine is almost archaic, I wrote it in 2009 back when OSI was active.
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Cool pic–yikes! The mirage of coolness then choking (all going up in smoke!) Thanks.
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Cool pic. Dying of lung cancer is not cool…a painful and undignified death. Choke is right !
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What a way to sensitize, an absolute marvel! Brand Managers are watching out…..
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