Your solemn gaze and quiet
mouth traces name on the
misted mirror and smiles at
the blush suffusing my skin.
It’s impossible to believe that
the world doesn’t desire you
the way I do.
So soft, so sensual, so unreal
the way you put your lips on
mine, when only the night is
awake with tip of blue waves
caressing the shoreline.
Sometimes I feel your features
see deep into my soul, silently
singing thoughts which even I
have no idea about.
How’s it that my heart pounds
in ways it hasn’t before?
At dawn, when sun kisses the
awakening sky, it’s impossible
yes impossible to believe that
the world doesn’t desire you
the way I do.
Photo credits: Pinterest
Word list: Sensual, features, blue, mouth.
Posted for ‘Poems in April’ @ Real Toads
Posted on Open Link Night @ dVerse Pub
60 Responses
OMG this is so hot!
Thank you so much, Eric 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
So sensual and special. No doubt about the emotions here 🙂 I especially like
“How is it that my heart pounds in ways it hasn’t before?” How indeed!
Thank you so much, Ellecee 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Oh this is beautiful….
Thank you so much, Dainy 😀 so good to see you ❤️
It seems a glimpse of your inner world? We have to be careful for what we ask for. The universe is always listening…..enjoyed the read.
Thank you so much, Annell 🙂 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Euphony: I had to look it up; beautiful word nice connotations.
Thanks for a very lovely poem Sanaa
much love…
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so good to see you ❤️
much love..
This is a most sensual write, Sanaa. You convey that emotion that some may only begin to grasp, about the power of desire.
Thank you so much, Kerry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
A wonderful poem. I especially like the repeated lines.
Thank you so much, Sherry 😀 so good to see you ❤️
I liked the repeating lines. A sensual and enjoyable write.
Thank you so much, Toni 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
Be thankful the world isn’t beating a path to his door…you’ve got him all to yourself!!! “…when only the night is awake…” love that line.
Bwahaha!❤️ Yes thank god for that! 😀 Thank you so much, Timoteo 🙂 so glad you liked it!❤️
I like the comparison of one’s desire with that of the world.
Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so good to see you ❤️
It is a very sweet profession of love and is a perfect example of “in the eyes of the beholder” . I was wondering if the “about” is better left off at the end…
singing thoughts which even I
have no idea
Thank you so much, Margaret 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
(nope. it’s perfect!)
Wow, what a lovely, sensual poem! I love the word ‘euphony’!
Thank you so much, Jo 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Gorgeous. I love the repetition and the beyond belief love. XX
Aww gosh!❤️ Thank you so much, Alison 😀 so glad you liked it!❤️
Goodness! This is gorgeous!
Thank you so much, Vivian 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Sweetly passionate ~ Thanks for joining us at dVerse ~
Thank you so much, Grace 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
Euphony is surely sweeter than cacophony, especially when it involves a kiss. Thank you for this gorgeous poem, you can hear what love sounds like.
Thank you so much, Lona 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Wonderful sensual write Sanaa.
I must find myself a man… :o}
Anna :o]
😀 😉
So genuinely sensuous. One glides through the verses without effort. A fine piece. SK
Thank you so much, Steve 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
You have captured the sensuality of desire with your words.
Thank you so much, Truedessa 😀 so good to see you ❤️
I smile, Sanaa. 🙂 🙂 Right away, not bragging now, of the ladies the Mrs. Jim used to play golf with. They though I was special and jokingly had a list to have me if Mrs. Jim would kick the budket. Mostlyi because I would answer the phone for her when she was gone, and take, and relay their messages to Mrs. Jim. The said most husbands weren’t reliable to handle things like that.
I liked your prompt very much today. It was a welcome challenge.
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Thank you so much, Jim 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
I like the lines, “It’s impossible to believe that
the world doesn’t desire you
the way I do.”
Such and honest statement intertwined with the cherishing of another.
Thanks for sharing this.
Aww gosh!❤️ Thank you so much, Alicia 😀 so glad you enjoyed it!❤️
What a wonderful passion you describe.
Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Sometimes love and passion can be so indescribable but you have found a way……
I especially like….”when only the night is
awake with tip of blue waves
caressing the shoreline.”
Thank you so much, Mish 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
much the world doesn’t seem to understand ~
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Michael ❤️
Wonderful! Sensual indeed, and the list words incorporated so smoothly that I had to hunt for them afterwards. You have shown us how to do it. 🙂
Thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Ah, love so beautifully portrayed.
Thank you so much, Beverly 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
How desirable is the beloved, how perfectly romantic is your poem!
Thank you so much, Lynn 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Some wonderfully evocative imagery in this intense and well constructed poem.
Thank you so much, James 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
That is some heavy duty desire, Sanaa! Perfect! Hugs!
Thank you so much, Bekkie 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
So graceful and sensual, Sanaa, and the artwork is lovely as well.
Thank you so much, Angela 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️