A lover without a pinch of rhetoric is as
though empty gestures;
I’d rather prefer it to be unmistakable,
feel it like the length of jalapeno
with my tongue
and then have him pour
milk down my throat, and spill on cheeks
and chin.
Photo credits: Pinterest
De is our lovely hostess at dVerse and the word tonight is “Pinch.” Come join us! 🩷
Posted for Quadrille #193 @dVerse Poets Pub
50 Responses
Jalapeno would be quite a sting… that milk would for shure soothe.
Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
A quadrille that appeals to the sense of taste, Sanaa, with bit of a sting in its tail and a hint of eroticism.
Thank you so much, Kim 😍 so glad you liked it! 💄❤️
Love that bit of a kick, why not, smiles. But not too much jalapeno for me.
Thank you so much, Grace 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
You have me wondering about those metaphors, Sanaa. Hot stuff!
Thank you so much, Lisa 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
phew! hot and tangible are these desires Sanaa. Great use of the pinch
Thank you so much, my dearest Laura 🥰 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Very spicy in more ways than one! We can all use a “pinch of rhetoric”. Nice one, Sanaa. 🙂
Thank you so much, Mish 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
Oh of course give lyrics. The ladies luv it the guys luv it too. Dont br dumb; speak😊
Nice one Sanaa. Thanks for dropping by my blog
Much♡love
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
Much love back to you 🌹
Very hot and spicy indeed…well done!
Thank you so much, Di 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Oh my, how are we to interpret that jalapeño? 😉
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Hahahaha thank you so much, Merril 😁 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
How long that jalepeno is, and how thirsty for that poured milk … very sensual!
Thank you so much, Kathy 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
yum
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A very hot and spicy poem Sanaa! Your images say it all!
Thank you so much, Dwight 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Spicy interpretation!
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A little seasoning, a little spice, and a nice smooth sooth. Perfect.
Thank you so much, Alexandra 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
This is so visceral, a poem you can taste. Well done.
Thank you so much, De 😀 so glad you enjoyed it! 💄❤️
(and thank you for the glorious prompt) 🌹
awakening all senses. a beautiful piece 💜
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Nice use of pinch and a pinch of jalapeno is enough to cause the burn!
Thank you so much, Christine 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
Is that a pinch of rhetoric, or several inches of rhetoric 😉 I enjoyed this, hehe
Hahaha thank you so much, JYP 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
Felt the setting of the jalapeño when reading. The opening is fabulous
Thank you so much, Jan 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
tasty poem, really enjoyed
Thank you so much, Roger 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
Sanaa,
The sensory imagery in your text is palpable, which is quite striking!
~David
Thank you so much, David 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
very spicy – love it
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Wow! You make your point with blazing heat, Sanaa. No jalapeno comes close.🔥 😊
Thank you so much, Dora 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Goodness me, that’s devilish, Sanaa! But of course it is, I don’t expect anything less than spicy when I pop over here 🙂 Beautiful work 💕
Awww gosh! Thank you so much, Sunra 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
I feel all the ways of heat in this, Sanaa!
This is hot, Sanaa! 🔥❤️