Listen to the sound;
Of the crashing waves.
From the silken sea;
Into the coral caves.
Frothing and foaming;
Waves break ashore.
Colored brilliant blue;
Atop the seagulls soar.
The water is harmonious;
To the song of whales.
Searching deep within;
Recollecting old tales.
The sound of waves;
Rhythmic and slow.
Peaceful as a lullaby;
Diminishing our woes.
Now the waves rush;
To kiss our fortunes.
Sea of opportunities;
Alluring with options.
Photo Credits: the-earth-story.com
Posted for Mid-Week Motif @ Poets United
& Posted on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads
Really the sound of wave presented by you is so beautiful..”peaceful as a lullaby” indeed…and a nice twist at the end 🙂
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First of all, I really enjoyed the sound effects. Nice backdrop to your poem, which showed many facets of the waves…..peaceful, rushing, and crashing as well! Waves have a beautiful melody!
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You remind me of the sound of the sea, a beautiful piece!
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Lovely rhythmic piece
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Beautiful…enjoyed your beautiful lines…and the rhythmic pounding of the waves in the video, Sanna.
Brilliant.
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Beautiful, Sanaa…the song of the sea……..so lovely.
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Sanaa I like the many sounds you, build into this poem, From the screech of a gull, the crashing, the song of sea life below, and the whispered tones of lovers as they taste her salt (perhaps).
Lovely and well metered Sunny One
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And this is it, captured in a poem with sound effects, this is why I go to the sea again and again to pray for options and patience. Lovely!
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I still like this poem!
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Waves as lullaby= YES.
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A truly magnificent poem, enhanced by the accompanying video. Filled with life and the power and rush of the waves..Love can offer the same experience at times!
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That first stanza is particularly lovely.
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Beautiful sea poem enhanced by the video.
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I love the music!
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‘Sea of opportunities’ – I like this metaphor. Enjoyed also the video and sound of waves..
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This is beautiful. I can tell you put your heart in this one. It is one of your best! Thank you so much for the sound of the waves. A treat for me since I live in the desert.
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Yes you really brought life to the waves – literal and otherwise..
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Beautifully brought forth. The use of sound effects is very effective.
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I was lost in these enchanting waves of words for a while, lovely 🙂
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My waves don’t crash, they are very peaceful. Listen to my YouTube here:
http://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2009/08/one-single-impression-ocean_08.html
I’ve seen a lot more places since I wrote that. Even to New Zealand and Australia south of the equator.
I will definitely go check it out 😀
Seems promising 🙂
Wow Sanaa! Peaceful as a lullaby and Sea of opportunities.
Peace, hope n enthusiasm! Love it!
There is such hypnotic gentleness in the sound of waves.. Loved the sound you added…
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I love the sound of those crashing waves.
I want to be THERE with them, in the cave or on the shore .
..
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The sound of waves;
Rhythmic and slow.
Peaceful as a lullaby;
Diminishing our woes.
Love the 4th stanza! It brings out the elements of hearing to tango with your words. Wonderful lines Sanaa!
Hank
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Love the texture of the first stanza… How our senses go from silk to coral, in such a smooth way… and crash.
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You have included beautiful sound qualities in your lines.
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I love how you used repetition of phrases to create a beautiful flow as well as a meditative tone.
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enjoyed reading this again, the colour, the rthym, the awe
very striking piece
much love…
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Sanaa this is a very sensuous poem and the sounds of the sea, which you have well described, play an important part in the flow and rhythm of the verse…
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