Sound Of Waves

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Listen to the sound;
Of the crashing waves.
From the silken sea;
Into the coral caves.

Frothing and foaming;
Waves break ashore.
Colored brilliant blue;
Atop the seagulls soar.

The water is harmonious;
To the song of whales.
Searching deep within;
Recollecting old tales.

The sound of waves;
Rhythmic and slow.
Peaceful as a lullaby;
Diminishing our woes.

Now the waves rush;
To kiss our fortunes.
Sea of opportunities;
Alluring with options.

 

Photo Credits: the-earth-story.com

Posted for Mid-Week Motif @ Poets United

& Posted on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads

Comments

  1. Sumana Roy says:

    Really the sound of wave presented by you is so beautiful..”peaceful as a lullaby” indeed…and a nice twist at the end 🙂

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sumana,

      Thank you so much dear, really put my heart in this one 😀
      So glad you liked it! Highly appreciated, lots of love
      xoxo

  2. Mary says:

    First of all, I really enjoyed the sound effects. Nice backdrop to your poem, which showed many facets of the waves…..peaceful, rushing, and crashing as well! Waves have a beautiful melody!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed the poem 😀
      Wanted to add some x factor 😉 Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  3. a says:

    You remind me of the sound of the sea, a beautiful piece!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Annell,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  4. gillena says:

    Lovely rhythmic piece

    Have a nice Wednesday

    Much love…

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  5. Panchali says:

    Beautiful…enjoyed your beautiful lines…and the rhythmic pounding of the waves in the video, Sanna.
    Brilliant.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Panchali,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  6. Beautiful, Sanaa…the song of the sea……..so lovely.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked the song 😀
      Highly appreciate your warm & kind words 🙂
      Lots of love
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  7. L. Moon says:

    Sanaa I like the many sounds you, build into this poem, From the screech of a gull, the crashing, the song of sea life below, and the whispered tones of lovers as they taste her salt (perhaps).

    Lovely and well metered Sunny One

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Leslie,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  8. Susan says:

    And this is it, captured in a poem with sound effects, this is why I go to the sea again and again to pray for options and patience. Lovely!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Susan,

      Thanks for the huge compliment 😀 So glad you liked it!
      Highly appreciate your kind words, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

    2. Susan says:

      I still like this poem!

      1. adashofsunny says:

        Hello Susan,

        Thank you so much dear 😀 wrote with a lot of enthusiasm 🙂
        Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
        xoxo

  9. Waves as lullaby= YES.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello De Jackson,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Have a great week ahead!

  10. Sanaa,

    A truly magnificent poem, enhanced by the accompanying video. Filled with life and the power and rush of the waves..Love can offer the same experience at times!

    Eileen

    Thank you for visiting my poems 🙂

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Eileen,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  11. Debi says:

    That first stanza is particularly lovely.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Debi,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
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  12. Rall says:

    Beautiful sea poem enhanced by the video.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rall,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  13. I love the music!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
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  14. humbird says:

    ‘Sea of opportunities’ – I like this metaphor. Enjoyed also the video and sound of waves..

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Humbird,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  15. Myrna says:

    This is beautiful. I can tell you put your heart in this one. It is one of your best! Thank you so much for the sound of the waves. A treat for me since I live in the desert.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Myrna,

      Thank you so much dear, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  16. Jae Rose says:

    Yes you really brought life to the waves – literal and otherwise..

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Jae Rose,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked the waves 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  17. G L Meisner says:

    Beautifully brought forth. The use of sound effects is very effective.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Mr Meisner,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, have a nice weekend! 🙂

  18. vandana says:

    I was lost in these enchanting waves of words for a while, lovely 🙂

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Vandana,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
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      1. Jim says:

        My waves don’t crash, they are very peaceful. Listen to my YouTube here:
        http://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2009/08/one-single-impression-ocean_08.html
        I’ve seen a lot more places since I wrote that. Even to New Zealand and Australia south of the equator.

        1. adashofsunny says:

          I will definitely go check it out 😀
          Seems promising 🙂

  19. There is such hypnotic gentleness in the sound of waves.. Loved the sound you added…

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thank you so much 😀 so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great day ahead!

  20. Jim says:

    I love the sound of those crashing waves.
    I want to be THERE with them, in the cave or on the shore .
    ..

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Jim,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Have a great day ahead.

  21. kaykuala h says:

    The sound of waves;
    Rhythmic and slow.
    Peaceful as a lullaby;
    Diminishing our woes.

    Love the 4th stanza! It brings out the elements of hearing to tango with your words. Wonderful lines Sanaa!

    Hank

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Hank,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Have a great day ahead 🙂

  22. Love the texture of the first stanza… How our senses go from silk to coral, in such a smooth way… and crash.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Magaly,

      Thank you so much, so nice to see you again 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  23. Kerry O'Connor says:

    You have included beautiful sound qualities in your lines.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Kerry,

      Thank you so much dear, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  24. I love how you used repetition of phrases to create a beautiful flow as well as a meditative tone.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rose,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  25. gillena says:

    enjoyed reading this again, the colour, the rthym, the awe
    very striking piece

    much love…

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  26. Nicholas V. says:

    Sanaa this is a very sensuous poem and the sounds of the sea, which you have well described, play an important part in the flow and rhythm of the verse…

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Nicholas,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a nice weekend!

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