Your touch, soft as a breeze,
sends a zing through my skin,
a spark lingers
in spaces
between
us
and I find myself
lost
in your gaze.
How’s it that the world is suddenly quiet?
That time is suspended, and
it’s just us,
glowing.
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Posted for Quadrille #217: Poems with Zing @dVerse Poets Pub
40 Responses
Glowing… there is a lot of heat in your wonderful poem
Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Romance with a zing, and so delightful, Sanaa. The opening lines hooked me, and then I read:
‘a spark lingers
in spaces
between
us’
and
‘it’s just us,
glowing’
and melted.
Thank you so much, my dearest Kim 🥰 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
I felt that zing! Well done!
Thank you so much, De 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Basically your poetry is just beautiful. In just a few words you can spin the world.
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I love that erotic electricity zinging between them!
Thank you so much, Lisa 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
What a delicious little quadrille, Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Nolcha 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
A romantic piece just in time for Valentines.
Thank you so much, Maria 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
A sizzling piece, Sanaa!
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The very best kind of zing! Well done.
Thank you so much, Dwight 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
Romantic and sensual, Sanaa. A wonderful zing! 💙
Awww gosh! Thank you so much, Merril 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
How lovely! Your Q glows with love, Sanaa. 💖💖
That is such high praise! Thank you so much, Punam 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
This is lovely, Sanaa!
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Oh I love the spark that lingers in the space between us ☺️❤️ Your poetry is exquisite Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Christine 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
I find this the most sensual poem of yours I’ve read yet.
Thank you so much, Priscilla 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Am just entranced by this, truly entranced.
Thank you so much, Ain 😀 so glad the poem and its imagery appealed to you 💄❤️
Ah, it’s always the spaces between that zing with electric tension.
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Sparks, glowing….and a lovely illustration for this most romantic poem!
Thank you so much, Lillian 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
That was so beautiful and romantic, Sanaa! I loved it!
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Thank you so much, Yvette 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
You deliver a sensual zing, pure magic in this quadrille love “potion”!
Thank you so much, Dora 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
“a spark lingers in spaces between us”
I find that sensual and mysterious.
Great poem, Sanaa!
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