I have gathered them for you, cupped in my palms,
their skins bruised with the hush of dusk,
where the vines tangle,
where the blackbirds leave only the husks
of sweeter things.
Blood-dark mulberries stain my wrists
like a vow unspoken.
Raspberries, their hollow mouths soft as the words
I’ve lost, collapse at your lips,
surrendering their sugar to the dark.
A spritz of rose water,
and a little pomegranate juice
to get the ball rolling—
steep a bag of tea in sake overnight.
Not everything is coitus,
flouting the laws of a whirlwind courtship
is too much of a risk,
one needs to watch carefully the way something happens
or when the other does something.
Steep the leaves in water gone to hush,
let the red fruit bleed its warmth,
a cup of dusk, a whisper of sun—
sip slow, before it cools.
Now add vanilla,
a hint of cinnamon and a bit of sugar
and observe as the steam rises in ribboned ghosts,
the tea dark with raspberries gone to syrup,
sliced peaches, or a wedge of orange
if you desire,
we drink to remember, or to forget,
each sip a fleeting comfort, a borrowed warmth,
like fireflies caught in a jar, glowing briefly
before the dark closes in,
before the silence settles around us.
I was a garden, wild and half untamed,
my roses closed to all but wind
and rain,
yet now they bow beneath
your touch,
their petals wide with unblushing pain.
Oh, love, you leave no hollow place
in me, no quiet hour, no breath unclaimed by fire—
No sooner have you taken all of me,
than night folds up and drags the stars away.
Still in my bones, the echoes of your name—
still in my throat, the salt of yesterday.
Stronger than rum,
vaster than prose or perhaps even poetry,
in the end,
love is all about the act of persisting.
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Stronger than alcohol, vaster than poetry, ferment the freckled red bitterness
of love! — Arthur Rimbaud
Delighted to be hosting Valentine-themed Poetics at dVerse, come join me! 🩷
I love the way you paint the love is such sweet and strong (may I even say spice) tastes.
A very tasty recipe.
Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
I could read this Potion over and over Sanaa though I would not dare to take a sip lest love went nuclear. Many adorable lines throughout not least towards the end with the first 4 of the final stanza <3
Thank you so much, Laura 😀 so glad the poem and its imagery appealed to you 💄❤️
Your title reminds me of the old song, ‘Love Potion Number 9’, Sanaa, but your poem is so much more beautiful and romantic. The berry stains are evocative, and I love the ‘spritz of rose water, and a little pomegranate juice’. I adore these lines:
‘Steep the leaves in water gone to hush,
let the red fruit bleed its warmth,
a cup of dusk, a whisper of sun’;
‘I was a garden, wild and half untamed,
my roses closed to all but wind
and rain’;
and
‘Oh, love, you leave no hollow place
in me, no quiet hour, no breath unclaimed by fire—
No sooner have you taken all of me,
than night folds up and drags the stars away’.
Awww gosh! Thank you so much, my dearest Kim 😍 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
PS: I had no idea there is a song by that name! Going to check it out 😊
A perfectly scented, oiled, powdered and glossed love-potion for beginnings which “persist.” I give you a couple decades to sense another last line – “love is all about the art of perishing.”
Thank you so much, Brendan 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
A lush, langorous, libido-laden, lyrical outpouring, Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Lisa 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
“Still in my bones, the echoes of your name—
still in my throat, the salt of yesterday.
Stronger than rum,”
^^^I really love that. I smiled at the line about mulberries because I have half a dozen big tall mulberry trees in my back yard and from mid-May to mid-June they drop about a billion mulberries all over the place and the juice is like purple ink! The birds eat them and drop purple bombs. It’s a wild 4 weeks.
4 weeks! Wow.. I can picture the birds and those gorgeous mulberry trees! It’s a mood, isn’t it? 🥰 I love that it is like purple ink!
Thank you so much, Shay 😀 so glad you enjoyed the poem 💄❤️
A whirlwind of words, of tastes, of touches and tiny philosophical gems, a delight to discover, to unpeel. Beautiful lines and moments.
Thank you so much, Ain 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
This is such beautiful lyric poetry!
Thank you so much, Mrityunjay 🙂 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
“vaster than prose or perhaps even poetry,
in the end,
love is all about the act of persisting”
Aint that the truth Sanaa…
Thank you so much, Andrew 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Totally a love story where boundaries blur and merge. Thoughtful and evocative!
Thank you so much, my dear Carol 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
A gorgeous poem, Sanaa. The last line says it all.
Thank you so much, Robbie 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Wow! That was riveting, Sanaa! I loved it!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you so much, Yvette 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
Be still my heart!!! However that is an absolute impossibility for it is beating out of my chest, my lips moist, never wanting to leave this ever-so-sensual poem. Thank you, thank you.
Awww gosh! Thank you so much, Helen 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
“Raspberries, their hollow mouths soft as the words”
Fantastic!!!
Much♡love
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Mmmm…this is sumptuous! I love it all, but “Oh, love, you leave no hollow place
in me” hit me the deepest.
Thank you so much, Jennifer 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
I really like this “Oh, love, you leave no hollow place
in me, no quiet hour, no breath unclaimed by fire” It reminded me of the obsessive nature of early love, when you can think of almost nothing else.
Thank you so much, Sean 🙂 so glad the poem and its imagery appealed to you 💄❤️
whew! luscious and full. a triumph of love poetry, Sanaa ~
Thank you so much, M 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
Oh my! This is so gorgeous, so delicious, so lush and so languorous! What a delectable potion, Sanaa!💗💗💗💗
Thank you so much, Punam 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
A gorgeous, sensuous poem of color and love.
❤️❤️❤️