Undo With Love

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For my prompt ‘Lets take a look at the cards, shall we’
on 5th August at 8 am EDT.

Posted on poems written on Prompt NightsΒ 

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& Posted forΒ Midweek Motif @ Poets United

Comments

  1. Susan says:

    Love! Especially “Most of our shadows are caused / by standing in our own sunshine” and “light tomorrow with today.” Love!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Susan πŸ˜€ it was an inspirational prompt ❀️

  2. Rall says:

    Reminds me of that Beatle song
    Love Love Love
    A poem of courage and positivity.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Rall πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it.

  3. Julian says:

    Love the opening four lines, a positive message through out

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you, so glad you liked it Julian πŸ™‚

  4. Sumana Roy says:

    o my…the undo line is a keeper Sanaa…wow….a beautiful poem…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Sumana ❀️

  5. I love this, especially “light tomorrow with today.”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Sherry ❀️

  6. Truedessa says:

    I really liked the beginning of this, yes we must rise above even when we feel we are drowning. Love lightens the spirit and one can float if necessary.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Wise words πŸ˜€ thanks for stopping by.

  7. This is one of your best works that I have read . I loved the positive message in it. It can inspire a lost soul. Beautifully written, Sanaa πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      I am so honored you feel that way, Purba πŸ™‚ thank you kindly ❀

  8. brian miller says:

    most of our shadows are caused by standing in our own sunshine. how profound a line. i cant help but feel there is something broken about that.

    rise above, indeed.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you Brian πŸ™‚

  9. I can hear the song as if a melody appeared as I read your words….what a fabulous poem and message!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Donna πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  10. Myrna says:

    I had an unpleasant experience today. Made me sad. Amazingly, your poem is like a little healing song just for me. It’s not easy, but we all must rise and love is the answer to even the questions we don’t ask.

    1. Sanaa says:

      I am glad my poem served as healing for you ❀

  11. Love love love love this. Very encouraging.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Moskowitz πŸ˜€

  12. Luk Lei says:

    I think we need a 4 chord melody and you may have a pop hit πŸ™‚ beautiful piece Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Glad you liked it Luk πŸ™‚ thanks for stopping by

  13. panchali says:

    Oh!! The poem beautifully carries the essence of love…Love it, Sanaa…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Panchali ❀️

  14. Old Egg says:

    Love what a powerful tool at our disposal. It can conquer anything. How inspirational the poem is Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      I am so glad you liked it Robin πŸ™‚

  15. Great advice! ‘Bloom where you are planted’ has long been one of my favourite sayings. πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Rosemary ❀️

  16. Thotpurge says:

    Light tomorrow with today.. a lovely thought!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you! So glad you liked it πŸ˜€

  17. This is pure strength-infused love while in the eye of desperation. We always need a friend that brings this wonderful thought/feeling into us… especially on those days when our own song is too quiet to keep us going. ❀️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Exactly my sentiments Magaly ❀️ so glad you liked it πŸ˜€

      1. I had to return to read this poem. I think the “Undo with love, love, love, love” refrain called me back. πŸ™‚

        1. Sanaa says:

          I know right! ❀ Thanks for stopping by πŸ˜€

  18. totomai says:

    Undo with love. I’ll remember this Sanaa. Life has still lots to offer despite disappointments, broken hearts and tragedies.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely πŸ™‚ thanks for stopping by Totomai.

  19. gillena says:

    Such a strong message, carried in a little crafted jar called poetry. Pour out your word Sanaa!

    Much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Most definitely ❀ Thanks Gillena πŸ˜€

  20. Another beautiful piece! I love the repeated lines. ❀

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Josslyn πŸ™‚

  21. Gina says:

    She looks so at peace in her own space….as should we all πŸ˜€ XXX

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you Gina πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it.

  22. Jae Rose says:

    This sings so wisely and beautifully – both figuratively and in rhythm.. yes.. undo the darkness with the light of love (for ourselves maybe)

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Jae πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it.

  23. Such an uplifting poem! Love it Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Hannah πŸ˜€

  24. Rommy says:

    So very sweet and encouraging!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Rommy ❀️ so glad you liked it!

  25. Freya says:

    Lovely! Which tarot cards inspired you?

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Freya, so glad you liked it ❀️ these were the three tarot cards which inspired me:

      The world (The Past)
      The High Priest (The Present)
      The Sun (The Future)

  26. I echo Susan’s comment – those lines stood out and resonated.

    1. Sanaa says:

      I am so glad you agree πŸ™‚ thanks for stopping by

  27. Mary says:

    Yes, true many times….we do sometimes seem to get in our own way! (creating shadows by standing in our own sunshine.)

    1. Sanaa says:

      So glad you agree, Mary πŸ™‚ thanks for stopping by ❀️

  28. Susan says:

    Oh! To get out of the way of my own sunshine would be wonderful! Oh, to “light tomorrow with today.” Thank you.

    1. Sanaa says:

      So glad you liked it Susan πŸ˜€ thanks for stopping by ❀️

  29. Kerry O'Connor says:

    These are words of wisdom we should all carry in our hearts.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Kerry πŸ™‚

  30. dsnake1 says:

    the power of love! very inspirational, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it.

  31. scott hastie says:

    Real intensity sustained within such a tight structure – so impressive Sanaa and a real pleasure to read. Hope you sparkle through the rest of your summer… With Best Wishes Scott

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much for your kind words, Scott πŸ™‚ Best wishes to you too.

  32. gillena says:

    Happy Sunday, Sanaa. Thank you for linking to my Sunday Lime
    luv the spunk in this inspirational piece

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      You’re most welcome Gillena πŸ˜€
      Happy Sunday ❀️

  33. Sherry Marr says:

    Sage advice, to undo with love.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Sherry ❀️ so glad you liked it πŸ™‚

  34. Magical Mystical Teacher says:

    Such an encouraging poem! Thank you!

    1. Sanaa says:

      You’re welcome πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it.

  35. Wendy Bourke says:

    Beautiful! Inspiring … a transcendent, life affirming piece of writing.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Wendy πŸ™‚

  36. bkmackenzie says:

    There is a time in life when most people experience the feeling of drowning, being shallowed up in the enormity of it… And you know that it is only love that can save us…bkm

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely πŸ™‚ thanks Barbara

  37. annell4 says:

    I think the answer is always love. In this you can be sure, you won’t fail.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Most definitely πŸ™‚ thank you kindly, Annell ❀

  38. ZQ says:

    Couldn’t have said it better πŸ™‚
    ZQ

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it.

  39. Imelda says:

    Love cures all ills. Nice write. ??

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Imelda ❀️

  40. Nicholas V. says:

    A good choice of a word, Sanaa, and a lovely poem!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Nicholas πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it.

  41. Your poem so well suits diverse situations — one of those wonderful pieces of universal poetry that speaks to the heart and mind on many levels.
    Thanks for participating in the Friday Night Music Prompt.

    1. Sanaa says:

      My Pleasure, Lorraine ❀️

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