
At midnight, I hear the moon
calling from the edge of the roof.
I could stay where shadows gather,
or jumpβ
not into darkness,
but towards silver possibility
that waits under my feet,
open as a promise,
quiet as becoming,
bright enough to stay.
Photo credits: Pinterest
Posted for Quadrille #353Β Jump-start your poem @dVerse Pub

38 Responses
that pesky moon calling me out at midnight
Precisely! Thank you so much, Rog π so glad the poem spoke to you πβ€οΈ
Oh, Sanaa. This is lovely. The moon calls to me, too. Those last three lines are stunning.
Thank you so much, De π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
Lovely communicative moon
Much love
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The moon is calling of course I love it. best silver ever
Thank you so much, Bjorn π so glad the poem resonated with you πβ€οΈ
jump “me to the moon and let me play among the stars” love the metaphor here, Sanaa
Thank you so much, Lisa π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
love the possibilities in this poem!
Thank you so much, Candy π so good to see you πβ€οΈ
ZOOMer!
Thank you so much, Ron π so glad the poem spoke to you πβ€οΈ
I really like this, Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Jenna π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
An interesting take on the prompt, Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Dwight π so glad the poem resonated with you πβ€οΈ
I always love your dreamy words Saana. I get lost in yoiur poetry every time π₯°β€οΈ
Thank you so much, Christine π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
Silver possibility. Absolutely splendid, Saana! π€©
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Lovely. You make me want to venture outside again!
Thank you so much, Judy π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
Beautiful moon callingβ¦ loved this poem π
Thank you so much, Paula π so good to see you πβ€οΈ
I like the line ‘quiet as becoming’ π
Nice write Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Shaun π so glad the poem appealed to you πβ€οΈ
This is gorgeous, so full of imagery and also, ghostly. I’m glad I’m back here, to read so much beautiful dVerse poetry!
Thank you so much, Freya π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
I love the atmosphere and emotion and mostly the change of direction – Jae
Thank you so much, Jae π so glad the poem resonated with you πβ€οΈ
Wonderful!!
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I love “silver possibility”
Thank you so much, Sara π so good to see you πβ€οΈ
I love – but towards silver possibility, a wonderful line and a fab poem Saana
Thank you so much, Paul π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ