Repartee

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Scent of ristretto and apple butter
pour whispers out unto readying
eve. Your eyes catechize as though
smoldering embers ―

Stirred, my heart pens down verse
as misty-eyed morn locks lips with
blushful night. You, and you alone
serve as incitation to bitter-sweet
poet’s muse.

 

 

Photo credits: Pixabay

Posted for Quadrille # 24 @ dVerse Pub

Posted on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads

and on Monday Writes @ My Blog – Verses

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Comments

  1. De Jackson says:

    LOVE this, so much:
    “misty-eyed morn locks lips with
    blushful night”

    Happy to see you at the Bar, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, De 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  2. paul scribbles says:

    Oh my…so delicate and sensuous. Love this.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Paul 🙂 good to see you ❤️

  3. Grace says:

    I love the scents and stirring of the pen’s muse ~ Thanks for joining us Sanaa ~

    1. Sanaa says:

      My pleasure, Grace 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  4. You are so skilled at writing sensual poetry, Sanaa. Making me envious!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aw! Thank you so much, Victoria 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  5. Thotpurge says:

    Very vivid..so nicely done Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Rajani ❤️

  6. barbara says:

    Seems so soft and ethereal. It is a mystery how a scent, a memory, a certain look in someone’s eyes, can be an inspiration. ❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      It definitely stirs the muse 🙂 thank you so much, Barbara ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂

  7. Kay says:

    So tender and delicate, juts lovely. ?

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kay 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  8. ladyleemanila says:

    lovely write, Sanaa 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you Ladylee! 😀

  9. rosemawrites says:

    uhhhuuh. my heart has just melted. ❤️ beautiful!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Rosemarie 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  10. Iris says:

    WOW, Sanaa! This is amazing! I love the opening, but it’s all so, so good.

    Also, I love that hiding inside the title is “re-party.” 🙂 Or maybe even “ray party.” Man, I’m so ready for sunbathing.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Iris 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  11. Really love this line:

    Your eyes catechize as though
    smoldering embers ―

    melts my heart!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Victoria 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  12. Truedessa says:

    It seems your muse found a beautiful poem. I especially like the second verse.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Truedessa ❤️

  13. angie says:

    the apple butter makes me feel warm among the smoldering embers. good morning, or good night

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Angie 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️ It’s Tuesday afternoon here.

  14. Maria says:

    WOW!! I love your use of words, Sanaa. ❤️ So delicate!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aw! Thank you so much, Maria 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  15. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    Love how that coffee and bakery stirred your muse.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  16. I love those opening lines, Sanaa, so delicious with enticing scents, bitterness and sweetness connecting to the end of the second stanza. I also love the sensuous lines
    ‘…misty-eyed morn locks lips with
    blushful night…’

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  17. lynn says:

    Fabulous write, Sanaa…rich, sensory images…and those eyes that “catechize”!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aw! Thank you so much, Lynn 😀 good to see you!❤️

  18. Frank Hubeny says:

    I liked this phrase: “misty-eyed morn locks lips with
    blushful night”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Frank 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  19. LadyInRead says:

    loved ‘misty-eyed morn locks lips with
    blushful night’
    Such a beautiful read, Sanaa.. and inspires me to try to pen down verses with the misty-eyed morn.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Vidya 🙂 good to see you ❤️

  20. This is such a pretty thing, Sanaa! You do express this well, as Victoria has said!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Walt 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  21. Your poem has left me hungry for apple-something… 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Magaly 😀 I was sort of hungry myself while writing this 😉 ❤️

  22. Beautifully alive and erotic.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Mosk ❤️

  23. Kerry O'Connor says:

    This one sizzles! Who could resist apple butter?

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  24. Marina Sofia says:

    Your sensuous imagery appeals to my sense of smell and taste in particular – the perfect morning nibble, it seems to me.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Marina 🙂 so nice to see you!❤️

  25. Margaret says:

    The poem flows off the tongue and the images are wonderful to ponder. “ristretto and apple butter” is so fun to say.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Margaret 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  26. kaykuala h says:

    Stirred, my heart pens down verse
    as misty-eyed morn locks lips with
    blushful night.

    There is that sudden inspiration that is recorded for posterity. Done immediately will ensure the details have not been missed or forgotten

    Hank!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Hank 🙂

  27. Xenia says:

    A beautiful recipe for inspiration Sanaa :o) xxx

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Xenia 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  28. Rommy says:

    The first line, with its contrast in food stuff, was quite arresting. I think of apple butter as a sweet, homely sort of food stuff, while ristretto feels far more sophisticated.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rommy ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  29. Ellecee says:

    So lovely, wish that I had that type of muse with me now 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  30. CC says:

    Such a creative and beautiful idea of morning and night locking lips. Clever!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, C.C 🙂 so good to see you! ❤️

  31. Jim says:

    Romance at its best. Brief but it couldn’t be much steamier. Touching too.
    Wonderful, Sanaa. Makes me wanna ‘be there.’
    ..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jim 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  32. What can I say, but ‘yummy!’? 😀

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  33. Anita says:

    Sweet & delicious like a dessert 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Anita 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

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