Renascence

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Whispered tales sprang out from the dark;
Floating in pearly dusk of Spring.
Nor rivers flow nor sweet birds sing;
Thus silence flails on drooping leaves.
Lichen on stones and moss on eaves.
Oh Gaia bring new world to birth;
Floweret band to bind thus earth.
Such strange attainment in your touch;
Lo! whom could hate or bear a grudge,
Come and shine for all you’re worth.

 

Photo credits: Pinterest

Form:Β DΓ©cima

Posted for MTB @ dVerse Poets Pub

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and for Poems in April @ Real Toads

Comments

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Linda,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  1. Gay says:

    Lovely – it trips along like a bubbling brook. The joy of spring is shot through in it. I think you could change the “you are” in the last line to “you’re” and have the right number of syllables and meter. I know it’s American usage, but that’s what I’d do.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Holly,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

      PS: I’ll do that. Thanks πŸ™‚

  2. Mary says:

    This speaks to me of the beauty and wonder of spring, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  3. Gayle Walters Rose says:

    There’s something almost magical in the feel of spring coming forth and turning dark to light. Quite a beautiful decima, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gayle,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  4. Shawna says:

    “Such strange attainment in your touch;
    Lo! whom could hate or bear a grudge,
    Come and shine for all you’re worth.”

    Beautiful, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Shawna,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  5. Myrna says:

    I loved this Sanaa. It reads like a prayer. May Gaia listen.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Myrna,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  6. I knew you would rock this one, Sanaa, as your rhyme and rhythm are always so gorgeous. Love it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello De Jackson,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  7. You had me at /Thus silence flails on drooping leaves/ & a pitch perfect decima has emerged, both tribute & balladic song.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Glenn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  8. Bjorn says:

    This is so beautiful. We need the beauty of nature don’t we?

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

      PS: Yes we do πŸ˜€

  9. Gorgeous, Sanaa πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Kim,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  10. Bryan Ens says:

    The paring of picture and poetry works very nicely in this call to heal the earth.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bryan,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  11. gillena says:

    For sure Sanaa, I can dance to the rhythm of your springs and the birds that sing. Thanks for your response

    Much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  12. “Oh Gaia bring new world to birth;
    Floweret band to bind thus earth.”

    Love this!!

    Beautiful poem, Sanaa!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Hannah,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  13. Sherry Marr says:

    Beautifully done!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  14. Bekkie says:

    Who could bear a grudge indeed! Happy Earth Day!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bekkie,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

      PS: Happy Earth Day πŸ˜€

  15. Ellecee says:

    Beautiful and filled with light,,food for the senses,,,

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Ellecee,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  16. Would it might be so!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  17. Love the picture you matched with your poem. They complement each other well.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Silver Gardenia,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  18. Barry D. says:

    Excellent wordflow. this feels like a joyous urging for a reawakening.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Barry,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

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