As I would bite into the ripeness of plums;
so, would I attempt to pave my way into your breast—
your breath would catch
as night moves closer to the inception of dawn;
so much of you is already written
into my soul.
A smile, a glimpse into hurrying possibilities;
the long, lush
and riotous reeds of your untamed desire would part,
igniting the sky—
the contour of your torso is nothing less than enigmatic;
it requires attention,
wind-blown kisses tinged with a willingness to explore;
for when we touch
even in the slightest, hushed and most insignificant way,
I am lifted.
Photo credits: Pinterest
Skylover Wordlist: Enigmatic (words found and used after
scrambling are) Tame, ignite, tinge 💝
Posted for Writers’ Pantry @ Poets and Storytellers United
34 Responses
What can I say? Breathtakingly beautiful as always. Your writing invites superlatives!
Thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
Nice to hear the audio as well, Sanaa…
“ even in the slightest, hushed and most insignificant way,
I am lifted”
Sanaa I hope I never meet you in person, I would surely melt as soon as you start speaking! While you can bring a lush sensuality to even the most mundane subjects, in this I was wondering if you have an actual love or if this was dreamscape. Clearly this was a foolish notion on my part! You know about the importance of touch, you are grounded in the body, and this ending is just… wow.
Oh gosh that is such high praise! Thank you so much, Eric 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
PS: I have an actual love, yes 🙂
Thank you so much, Rajani 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
Sensuous…………………………………want to keep drinking from that glass………………..
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I love the shift from innocence to naughtiness in the title, Sanaa, and I especially love the lines:
‘the long, lush
and riotous reeds of your untamed desire would part,
igniting the sky’
and
‘wind-blown kisses tinged with a willingness to explore’.
Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
As always, your poetry is beautiful, romantic and melodious. I enjoy your audios too. <3
Thank you so much, Khaya 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
This is certainly your forte, the passion and sensous romance. Another hot one
Happy Sunday
Much💖love
Thank you so much, Gillena 🙂 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Happy Sunday to you too!
much love …
Humans do tend to be much more adventurous in their actions which I suppose why we think we are more important than other creatures. Yes, we have excelled in touching over the centuries and sharing gifts is another so we do have some good points!
Thank you so much, Robin 🙂 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
You had me a ripe plums but even before that: bite. I also like the internal rhyme of “touch even the slightest, hushed. “
Thank you so much, Colleen 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
Astonishing things happen when we find someone who has already been written into our soul.
Absolutely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, MMT 💄❤️
ooh this was deliciously written. thanks Sanaa for the delightful read. hehe.
Thank you so much, Humblekind Poet 🙂 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
I remember young love and the thrill of discovery of a lover’s landscape. Thankfully thrills remain even though I am a frequent visitor of my beloved’s.
Thank you so much, Rommy 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Yup! You excel at this Sanaa–gorgeous write
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So vividly passionate and coated with good old longing. One can almost see it all happening. Maybe that explains my sudden need for a fan *cough*.
Thank you so much, Magaly 🙂 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
Erotic ad passionate. You do it so well!
Thank you so much, Beverly 🙂 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
You had me at…so much of you is already written
into my soul. A passionate piece.
Thank you so much, Ayala 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
“for when we touch
even in the slightest, hushed and most insignificant way,
I am lifted.”
You must be so in tuned with your love, enjoy (and congratulations)
Thank you so much, Joel 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️