Of poems and misspelled wants

The night draws moments upon my flesh
as I lie breathless beneath the cold moon,
searching for warmth in your eyes.

Desires burn every fibre of my being
I am lost in my yearning of you,
greeting the season with a half-smile.

Sunshine soft spreads over startling sky
as poems one after another make their
way onto virgin sheet of paper.

 

Photo credits:Β Pinterest

Word list: desires, night, flesh, poems.Β 

Posted on Get Listed: November Edition @ Real Toads

also posted on “Open Link Night” @ dVerse Poets Pub

70 Responses

  1. angie says:

    Sanaa, I was not startled in the least to read your poem using the first 4 Different words from the others. Hooray. I can count on you to bring the passion to the paper. Virgin paper is all the more tantalizing, and I love “Sunshine soft spreads over startling sky…as poem…”
    It brings more than a half smile to my face to read you. Thanks for participating.

  2. Fireblossom says:

    I think you may have been born into the wrong era!

  3. A Sid says:

    Hot!
    πŸ˜‰

  4. vandana says:

    oh! my god. No words to describe the romantic and mushy mushy emotions flowing here.

  5. kanzensakura says:

    A lovely poem full of passion.

  6. Vivian Zems says:

    The passion here is so raw! Love it! You got me with the first line😊

  7. Marian says:

    Yowza! Is it hot in here?

  8. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    I love the passion and that wonderful title… of course there was one choice of words that was made for you.

  9. Frank says:

    I liked the words of poems making their way onto virgin paper at the end.

  10. Romance, passion and poetry – what more could a girl want on a Thursday evening? I love those final lines, Sanaa!

  11. Night or day, we poets are hatching words, ready to whelp poetics on demand–either a prompt or a circumstance. Your romantic perspective is always refreshing as the world strains to survive, and my bones ache with November’s embrace.

  12. Amaya says:

    Ahh, and to think we (poets) were once so pure!

  13. Anna :o] says:

    A passionate write – love it!
    Anna :o]

  14. lillian says:

    Stunning as always…especially, for me, the last stanza.

  15. Oh this is beautiful. I too wonder if your spirit was birthed in another era.

  16. Shaista says:

    Hi Sanaa! (Have I ever told you that’s my favourite name ever?)
    Love the sensuous poem, and especially that virgin sheet of paper… but also the music and rhythm of the image that precedes it. A lovely combination.

  17. Beautiful poem and picture to match!

  18. Grace says:

    Sweet sensuality Sanaa ~ Thanks for joining in ~

  19. It’s writing like this that can convince me of the power of letters to enliven the passion of separated lovers! What a write you made!

  20. Sara McNulty says:

    A passionate poem, Sanaa. I love ‘virgin sheet of paper’.

  21. Alwi Shatry says:

    From title to virgin paper, your poem invites you in. Wonderfully done Sanaa!

  22. Namy says:

    Misspelled wants says it all! And virgin paper completes the picture. Beautifully done!

  23. gillena says:

    I luv the Title and drooled over every word of your poem, YUM

    much love…

  24. I loved this one! This was a romantic poetic treat πŸ™‚ I loved the idea of virgin paper πŸ˜‰

  25. Old Egg says:

    Sanaa, you even made writing poetry sound sexy! What a delightful poem you have created here.

  26. Thotpurge says:

    Love the idea of misspelled wants… nice one Sanaa. Am hosting micropoetry month on my blog through November.. do join in if you can!!

  27. Xenia says:

    Such a beautiful write Sanaa, I especially love ‘Sunshine soft spreads over startling sky as poems one after another make their way onto virgin sheet of paper’ xxx

  28. Sue Anderson says:

    A poem of passion and romance. I think I needed this today!

  29. Helen says:

    Oooooh, from the luscious image to the last word ~ incredible.

  30. Candy says:

    the first stanza just drew me in – poetry and passion

  31. X says:

    Ha. Me thinks there is a bit more going on here.
    Though I will say, it is a marvelous thing when the poems really get to flowing.
    I think in the end, they make that sheet a bit more.

    And I hope that is no lie.

    Fun play in the title too, It made me look further.

    Good to see you as well.

  32. Caliban says:

    This is wonderfully evocative. I like the way you brought your literal and figurative description together in the final verse.

  33. Pat says:

    Can imagine the steam in the poems spilled onto virgin paper. Nice write πŸ™‚

  34. rosemawrites says:

    romantic. subtly sensual. and love the ending!

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