Of Poems and Early Mornings

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At the blush of dawn put a pen to
paper and gather oh restless soul.
In the midst of scribbled thoughts
let out a deep sigh, breathe in the
morning air saturated with dreams
and prayer. A poem is a glimpse of
murmuring heart.

 

Photo credits: Pinterest

Posted on ‘Quadrille #49′ @ dVerse Pub

and on ‘Tuesday Platform’ @ Real Toads

Comments

  1. Bjorn says:

    The thought of that glimpse is excellent… I usually have a hard time appreciating mornings though… maybe because they are grey and cold.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bjorn ☺️ so glad you liked it ❤️

  2. Victoria says:

    There is no more sacred time than early morning for both poetry and prayer–love this. A poem is a glimpse of murmuring heart.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Victoria ☺️ so glad you liked it ❤️

      (and thank you for the lovely prompt)

  3. Xenia Tran says:

    A beautiful write Sanaa, I especially love ‘breathe in the morning air saturated with dreams and prayer’ and how a poem is a glimpse of the heart :o) xxx

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Xenia ☺️ so good to see you ❤️

  4. Jane Dougherty says:

    Lovely idea, sitting at dawn’s first light to write poetry!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jane ☺️ so glad you liked it ❤️

  5. belle says:

    Love “A poem is a glimpse of
    murmuring heart.”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Belle 😊 so glad you liked it ❤

  6. Candy says:

    This is so beautiful it makes me sigh.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww gosh!❤ Thank you so much, Candace 😊 so glad you enjoyed it!❤

  7. wildchild47 says:

    breathe in the
    morning air saturated with dreams
    and prayer.

    if there is the time, it is a sacred moment, a chance to connect …. a gift to hold as the day unfolds … 🙂

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  8. Pat says:

    Love this. Such possibilities come at the top of the day. Freshly scrubbed and infused with a fresh start😊

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Pat 😊 so glad you liked it ❤

  9. De Jackson says:

    Oh, my. YES.
    “At the blush of dawn put a pen to
    paper and gather oh restless soul.”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, De 😊 so good to see you ❤

  10. DReaMs
    WeAVinG
    AWaKE
    MorNinG
    STaR
    VeNuS
    FloWerS aLiVE
    NoW iN
    BReaTHe
    oF PoEtry
    WaKinG DreaM..
    LuCiD
    GuiDE
    PosTS
    SPRinG..:)

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  11. Dwight says:

    Poetry …. a heart murmur!! I love it!!
    Dwight

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Dwight 😊 so glad you liked it ❤

  12. Kanzensakura says:

    One of your best Sanaa. I love the glimpse of the heart and using early morning to blend both poetry and prayers. Beautiful write.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Toni 😊 so good to see you ❤

  13. Sara says:

    I love that last line. Beautiful poem, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sara 😊 so glad you liked it ❤

  14. Frank says:

    I agree that a poem is a glimpse of a heart.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Frank 😊 so glad you liked it ❤

  15. lynn says:

    Love your line of “morning air saturated with dreams and prayer”…that’s inspirational!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Lynn 😊 so good to see you ❤

  16. Janice says:

    A beautiful morning moment Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Janice 😊 so glad you liked it ❤

  17. Truedessa says:

    This is very beautiful, soft and heartfelt.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Truedessa 😊 so glad you liked it ❤

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  18. Amaya says:

    The “morning air saturated with dreams
    and prayer” is lovely!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Amaya 😊 so glad you liked it ❤

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❤❤❤

  19. A perfect reflection of the heart!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Annell 😀 so glad you liked it ❤

  20. Ahhhh! Although I am not really a morning person, you make it sound so delightful!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤

  21. D.Avery says:

    You describe a luxurious morning. ..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, D.Avery 🙂 so good to see you ❤

  22. Love this! Including this perfect ending:

    “A poem is a glimpse of
    murmuring heart.”

    🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so glad you liked it ❤

  23. Old Egg says:

    Well my heart has murmured quite a bit over the years. However that makes it so much easier to write romantic poetry doesn’t it Sanaa? Beautifully written.

    1. Sanaa says:

      It certainly does!❤ Thanks for stopping by, Robin ❤

  24. Bev says:

    I wish I were a morning person. I’ve missed a million sunrises. This is beautiful.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Beverly 😀 so glad you liked it ❤

  25. Mish says:

    The last line is stunning, Sanaa. Could stand alone as a memorable quote.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Mish 😀 so glad you liked it ❤

  26. Reading this felt like a refreshing morning! Lovely poem.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Silver Gardenia 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤

  27. I really like the form of this quadrille, Sanaa. It’s like one of those old snapshot photos. We seem to be on the same track in the line:
    ‘In the midst of scribbled thoughts
    let out a deep sigh, breathe in the
    morning air…’ 🙂
    I love ‘A poem is a glimpse of murmuring heart’.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww gosh!❤ Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you liked it!❤

  28. Bekkie says:

    Truth! Love it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bekkie 😊 so glad you liked it ❤

  29. Wonderful write, Sanaa! Reminds me of the breakfast table haibun I wrote regularly…before my blogging obsession began! LOL! 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww gosh!❤️ Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so glad you enjoyed it!❤️

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