The river adorned shall ebb and flow;
So strange the attainment in its touch.
Her mind would hold with desperate clutch.
Similar to the song of river is life;
She gazed upon in curious delight.
River’s crusade had courage and might.
The river lapped so peacefully;
Its rhythm attached to memory.
She felt a rather magnetic pull;
Those river trails were beautiful.
Along the river weaved dreams and goals;
Restored the cadence in her soul.
Photo Credits: giphy.com
Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United
44 Responses
There is nothing quite so enticing as a bubbling mountain stream. What a great illustrated clip you have provided for us to compliment your beautiful words.
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Restorative, indeed! I love your matching a human life’s cadence to the river’s flow.
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Nature does indeed restore the cadence of the soul..well said.
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Along with the beautiful video this indeed was a tonic for the soul 🙂
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I love how river’s song mingles with life’s…beautifully penned…
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Very visual and especially like the “pull/beautiful” rhyme;
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That is what the river does for me too – restores the cadence in my soul when I miss the ocean too acutely. I was pleased to see and hear the river here, as well. Smiles.
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What a beautiful poetry you have weaved here, Sanaa. Extremely refreshing…and the video is equally captivating!! Lovely…
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Your words and the sound of the water brings a sense of calm and serenity.
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Your poem flows beautifully like a river ~ lovely rhythm and rhyme. I’ve written about a river here:
http://loredana-donovan.blogspot.com/2014/08/let-it-flow.html?m=1
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What a beautifully restful poem, Sanaa; and I do enjoy the river you have featured as photo as well.
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What lovely words. The river of life, can be so beautiful. Thank you for your poem as well as the peaceful video.
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luv the cadence of your river poem
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A classic write Sanaa! The video with the bubbling effect is the icing!
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This definitely was an ode. And thanks for the inclusion of the video. It made your already brilliant ode more alive and inspiring for its readers. enjoyed it!
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You are a wonderful poet! So very, very lovely!
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Love the idea of the river’s song blending with life. Nice photo as well.
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Oh yes ~ you’ve definitely captured the soothing, healing powers of the river.
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Lovely treat of image, poetry and sound.
The river comes alive.
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What a sweet stream, and delightful description!
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Love the sound effects !
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A nice piece of writing, Sanaa. Our life flowing like a river is a nice image. Beautiful Gif to illustrate your words.
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