
Fischer’s lovebirds perched upon a limb;
Their whistles and song as spoken word.
I melt as though the heart had stirred.
I meditate upon their fearless flight;
As though echoes of a familiar chord
Melodies sweet in the gale are heard.
On blossom and bough they followed suit;
Where citrus and olive are fairest of fruit.
How often I pause on their motley charm;
As the slumber of sun in the ocean’s arms.
Lovebirds sing one song for me;
Rouse thus soul to roam on free.
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The citrus and olive lend such magic to the imagery..
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Delightful poem with gorgeous pic!
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Nothing more cheerful than birdsong……..this is beautifully written, Sanaa.
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This made me smile! Delightful!
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I found this one difficult to follow until noting the inspiration to soar coming from the one song for the narrator. I hope they are as happy as they make others.
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I’m totally absorbed in your poem. I understand completely the stirrings of bird songs
Much love…
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“motley charm” is such a charming image!
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The line I loved was “The slumber of sun in the oceans arms”. This is a beautiful poem Sanaa.
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“Melodies sweet in the gale are heard.”…ah…that’s the freedom song of a fearless heart….
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The picture is adorable and the 3rd verse is my favorite. A lovely write Sanaa.
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Really need a melody to this one. It sings!
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A lovely ode! Sweet photo!
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What a charming piece,Sanaa!
βThe slumber of sun in the oceans armsβ…..awww! Brilliant!
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A truly magical poem Sanaa – i picture you being lost in their song and enjoying every second of it – and sharing it with us too π
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What a beautifully sensitive poem, Sanaa!
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I like the melody of the piece
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I love the meditative pausing quality to this…beautiful Sanaa!
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Wow Sanaa… I am so mesmerized by your poetry.Loved it and want to read it again and again.
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