October sings

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October’s dew spangled beauty ―
alongside gold and auburn dreams
cuts through ever’y doubt and pain
round corners of gelid winter sings.
Stunned, I watch with breath abate
as critique and pen accumulate ―
bear witness to my soul (solace)

 

 

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Posted on Sunday Mini Challenge @ Real Toads

& Posted on Monday Writes @ My Blog – Verses

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Also posted on the Poetry Pantry @ Poets United 

Comments

  1. I simply love the idea of October healing through hurt… and crafting natural art as it does it. This is lovely to read and imagine, Sanaa. ❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Magaly ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  2. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    October has a hand that soothes… something we need these days.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Bjorn 🙂

  3. magyar says:

    So good to visit, thanks for posting.

    seasons close
    ever the birth of others
    natures egg

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Magyar 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  4. Sherry Marr says:

    I love the gold and auburn dreams.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  5. Stunning in its beauty – you give such rich images of October in a few exquisite words. Thanks for sharing.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Stacie ❤️ so glad you liked it.

  6. I like the “pen accumulate” and think we should sing this spangled song over the one about war.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Colleen ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂

  7. Candy says:

    Love the ‘dew spangled beauty’

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Candy ❤️ good to see you 🙂

  8. Jim says:

    I’m glad you have her in a happy mood, singing. Probably she is singing the Happy Birthday Song to me towards the end of her month. Nicely written.
    ..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Jim 🙂 good to see you ❤️

  9. annell4 says:

    I felt your poem in the “souls” of my feet!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Annell ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂

  10. kaykuala h says:

    I watch with breath abate
    as critique and pen accumulate

    One has to accept it in the hope it helps to create good feelings

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Hank 🙂

  11. gillena says:

    Luv how you bless October with your words and wishes

    “October’s dew spangled beauty ―
    alongside gold and auburn dreams”

    Thank you for linking this gem to Monday WRites

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      My pleasure Gillena ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

      Much love..❤️

  12. debi says:

    dew spangled beauty ―
    alongside gold and auburn dreams……that is so lovely

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Debi ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  13. angie says:

    sort of a star spangled banner for October

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Angie ❤️ good to see you 🙂

  14. Old Egg says:

    Each month has its charm but October alone waves goodbye tears falling in the hope we will meet again. Beautifully written Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Robin 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  15. A song of healing…a beautiful October thought

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Susie ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂

  16. Thotpurge says:

    Dew spangled… lovely image.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Rajani ❤️

  17. Jae Rose says:

    I love this song – it feels more like an internal one – content and thankful

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jae ❤️ so nice to see you 🙂

  18. Susan says:

    Rarely have you shown such sorow and acceptance at once! I see that October has indeed accumulated in your pen. Gorgeous writing.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Susan 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  19. Autumn is the perfect season to write poetry … a touch of melancholy and soothing words … lovely ❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Loredana 🙂 good to see you ❤️

  20. Mary says:

    Lovely autumn imagery here, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Mary ❤️ good to see you 🙂

  21. Truedessa says:

    You had me hooked after the first two beautiful lines..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Truedessa ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂

  22. Myrna says:

    Love the feeling throughout this which depicts autumn, my favorite season. Lovely writing Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Myrna ❤️ good to see you 🙂

  23. Wendy Bourke says:

    “gold and auburn dreams” … sigh … lovely.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Wendy ❤️

  24. You make it sound magical!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rosemary ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  25. dsnake1 says:

    indeed a song! rich imagery and a soothing rhyme.
    enjoyed the poem! 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, dsnake 🙂 good to see you.

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