The massive downpour of rain;
Shall never cease to amaze.
While bound with a tender gaze;
We shall re-live the golden days.
Shall never cease to amaze;
The clouds clad in grey.
We shall re-live the golden days;
Setting our hearts ablaze.
The clouds clad in grey.
While bound with a tender gaze;
Setting our hearts ablaze.
The massive downpour of rain.
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Form: Pantoum
Posted on Poetics @ dVerse Poet’s Pub
Well, we can hope the monsoon is gentle. I know it can be a relief from the heat. You added your own bit of heat with his gaze. Ha. Hope it was a sweet relief.
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I like the repetition in this, bringing everything full circle. Nice take on the prompt. Peace, Linda
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It is indeed amazing to witness the massive downpour of rain ~ I like how you tie this up to the gentle gaze of the loved one ~
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This is my favorite line: “While bound with a tender gaze.”
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Setting our hearts ablaze…that could be quite the storm.
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I truly like this gentle and sensual monsoon of romance. The repetition of the lines make for a truly cyclical poem that is wonderful.
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there’s so much that the rain can set free in us…
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Nice write, like the repetitious style that sinks in the thoughts..”Setting our hearts ablaze”
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The relief from the heat, the way you bring in the love, what a wonder of the monsoon.
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WOW–Well Done!!
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Nice metaphor of love…that tender gaze that sets the heart ablaze…lovely!
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Sanaa, your poem today was a delight to read. I especially like the consistent rhymes line after line, and you do bring out the positive side of the monsoon. I have enjoyed it, thank you!
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I would like to live a year in lands where the monsoon comes – to feel the cycle of life there.
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Wonderful rhyming take Sanaa! A monsoon can be so welcomed sometimes. As long as it rains without floods it is ok!
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True – it never ceases to amaze. Well done with the repetition – and thanks for joining my prompt.
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So lovely! The repeating lines make this sing.
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Such a well-penned poem…
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The song-like structure adds to the wistful feel. Nicely done 🙂
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I like the smell of rain, and the showers of blessings that come along with it. You have expressed it so well in this piece and its a wonderful poem.
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Luv your form in relating this poem; one cannot help but take it all in , not missing a single crumb
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Nicely done!
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