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The massive downpour of rain;
Shall never cease to amaze.
While bound with a tender gaze;
We shall re-live the golden days.

Shall never cease to amaze;
The clouds clad in grey.
We shall re-live the golden days;
Setting our hearts ablaze.

The clouds clad in grey.
While bound with a tender gaze;
Setting our hearts ablaze.
The massive downpour of rain.

 

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Form: Pantoum

Posted on Poetics @ dVerse Poet’s Pub

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Comments

  1. X says:

    Well, we can hope the monsoon is gentle. I know it can be a relief from the heat. You added your own bit of heat with his gaze. Ha. Hope it was a sweet relief.

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  2. I like the repetition in this, bringing everything full circle. Nice take on the prompt. Peace, Linda

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  3. Grace says:

    It is indeed amazing to witness the massive downpour of rain ~ I like how you tie this up to the gentle gaze of the loved one ~

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  4. Lila says:

    This is my favorite line: “While bound with a tender gaze.”

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  5. Truedessa says:

    Setting our hearts ablaze…that could be quite the storm.

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  6. kanzensakura says:

    I truly like this gentle and sensual monsoon of romance. The repetition of the lines make for a truly cyclical poem that is wonderful.

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  7. claudia says:

    there’s so much that the rain can set free in us…

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  8. Dorianna says:

    Nice write, like the repetitious style that sinks in the thoughts..”Setting our hearts ablaze”

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Dorianna,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
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  9. Bjorn says:

    The relief from the heat, the way you bring in the love, what a wonder of the monsoon.

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  10. Dell Clover says:

    WOW–Well Done!!

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  11. Bryan Ens says:

    Nice metaphor of love…that tender gaze that sets the heart ablaze…lovely!

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  12. kelvin s.m. says:

    Sanaa, your poem today was a delight to read. I especially like the consistent rhymes line after line, and you do bring out the positive side of the monsoon. I have enjoyed it, thank you!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Kelvin,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
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  13. billgncs says:

    I would like to live a year in lands where the monsoon comes – to feel the cycle of life there.

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  14. kaykuala h says:

    Wonderful rhyming take Sanaa! A monsoon can be so welcomed sometimes. As long as it rains without floods it is ok!

    Hank

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  15. Abhra says:

    True – it never ceases to amaze. Well done with the repetition – and thanks for joining my prompt.

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  16. Candy says:

    So lovely! The repeating lines make this sing.

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  17. Such a well-penned poem…

    1. adashofsunny says:

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  18. Huilota says:

    The song-like structure adds to the wistful feel. Nicely done 🙂

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  19. blogoratti says:

    I like the smell of rain, and the showers of blessings that come along with it. You have expressed it so well in this piece and its a wonderful poem.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Blogoratti,

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  20. Gillena says:

    Luv your form in relating this poem; one cannot help but take it all in , not missing a single crumb

    Thank you for linking in at Monday WRites ; do have a blessed week

    Much love..

    1. adashofsunny says:

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