As I turn pages
of dismal,
dark and decadent night,
a gorgeous itch of you
bleeds through
into tomorrow.
Feel summer
weave into wind,
dance with dilated leaves,
we align our mouths
and kiss misery away.
Love for you exists but
is it enough?
Photo credits: Blake Carmichael, Burnt
Posted for Quadrille #60 @ dVerse Pub
And on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads
Really nice. “a gorgeous itch of you / bleeds through / into tomorrow.” — provactive!
Thank you so much, Qbit 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Nice Quadrille with vivid imagery. 😊
Thank you so much, Kathy 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Nice lines: “we align our mouths
and kiss misery away”
Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Yes Frank, that is a nice line, use it with care it has been known to be effective 😏
Sorry, made me giggle – couldn’t resist 😅
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Love that tiltillating summer itch specially with:
a gorgeous itch of you
bleeds through
Thanks for joining us Sanaa ~
Thank you so much, Grace 😀 so good to see you ❤️
This is lovely! I especially like these lines:
” a gorgeous itch of you
bleeds through”
Thank you so much, Jo 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
A lot of steaminess for forty-four. Great writing!
Thank you so much, Charley 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Tantalizing.
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That is some itch and it needs to be satisfied.
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Truedessa ❤️
Love for you exists but
is it enough?
The beauty is that the itch is always there for a repeated fulfillment!
Hank
Thank you so much, Hank 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
Beautiful rhythm in this piece.
Thank you so much, Jo-Anne 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
The gorgeous itch bleeding through is a big success with your readers! I agree, it’s a great image, and a lovey, dark velvet-y poem.
Thank you so much, Sarah 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
A romantic itch, Sanaa! I love:
‘a gorgeous itch of you
bleeds through
into tomorrow’.
Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
What some gorgeous word combinations here Sanaa; especially “gorgeous itch”, ”decadent night” and not forgetting “align our mouths and kiss misery away” that even gives this old reader the itch too!
Thank you so much, Robin 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Sanaa- you write provocative so well! This is beautiful.
Thank you so much, Linda 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Oh you always have a romantic way with words. Those first three lines are delicious!
Thank you so much, Lillian 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
A beautiful write Sanaa, I especially love ‘a gorgeous itch of you bleeds through into tomorrow’ :o) xxx
Thank you so much, Xenia 😀 so good to see you ❤️
The final question provides an intriguing conclusion to this description of passion.
Thank you so much, Kerry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
turning pages of night!!! very interesting image Sanaa
much love…
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Much🌼love
There is something about the image of Summer flirting with the wind and “dilated leaves” that give delightful goosebumps! Fine write.
Thank you so much, Daniella 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
depression often is a cloak one can’t overcome – will love be enough? Let’s hope so.
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Margaret ❤️
Goodness this is heavily sensuous, Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Chris 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Beautiful, sensual imagery that we have come to know you for.
Thank you so much, Victoria 😀 so good to see you ❤️
“a gorgeous itch of you
bleeds through
into tomorrow”
I love that line. Beautifully written senusality
Thank you so much, Susie 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
I’m also a fan of that itch imagery, and how when scratched it bleeds.
Thank you so much, Rommy 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Kissing things better is a great cure all. Hot poem.
Thank you so much, Cressida 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Nice quadrille, Sanaa. Being alone at night is hard, a good reason not to. If that loneliness is from a liked one not being there.
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Thank you so much, Jim 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
Oh, what lovely images! I especially like ‘gorgeous itch of you’ and ‘dance with dilated leaves’.
Thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
“In a mirror “ sigh… lovely lack of disambiguation, leaves us wondering has she descended into lover’s arms or a dream? Poignant final question, for the ages…
And oh the dilated leaves!
Thank you.
Thank you so much, Lona 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Exquisite, Sanaa….and I love the creation of a “gorgeous itch”.
Thank you so much, Mish 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Sigh. Sensual poetry perfected.
Thank you so much, Therisa 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Philosophical lovely lines, “Love for you exists, is it enough?” Nice, I liked it.
Thank you so much, Rudraprayaga 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
What is enough? The answer is hard to come by.
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Annell ❤️
Oh yes, love is enough for me
Thank you so much, KB 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Love is enough, that precious gift.
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Annell ❤️