Come with me, let us journey to a place,
where words they slice troubled waters,
where sunshine pours like drops of gold,
where a person isn’t judged by deeds or
past, where sorrow seems to live nor last.
Come with me, let us beyond blue yonder
tread, devour fodder that ignites our muse
long slept, where time’s uncertain and lets
loose its strings, where happiness blooms
as though Adonis in Spring.
‘Come listen to your heart and hear it sing.’
Photo credits: Pinterest
Posted for Fireblossom Friday @ Real Toads
also on Open Link Night @ dVerse Poets Pub
Let’s find a place like that……..where sorrow doesnt last and the muse is ignited! Mine definitely needs some help these days!
Thank you so much, Sherry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Oh definitely my soprano voice I can throw in there
Thanks for a lovely fantasy place Sanaa
Much love…
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Much love…
That sounds like a fine place to be, Sunny.
Thank you so much, Shay 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
(and thank you for the lovely prompt)
Your sanctuary is lovely–and we poets could migrate there for residency. a beautiful port /where words slice troubled waters/, where muses awaken as needed, where sorrow has little to no dominion; smile.
Awww!❤️ Thank you so much, Glenn 😀 so glad you liked it! ❤️
I will definitely come! A lovely place and poem.
Thank you so much, Jennifer 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
This is just a magical invitation:
let us beyond blue yonder
tread
Thank you so much, De 😀 so good to see you ❤️
need some muse igniting fodder for sure!!!
Thank you so much, Rajani 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
I enjoyed this calming safe space you’ve created with your words.
Thank you so much, Mother Wintermoon 🙂 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
While we “loose the strings…”, I can almost hear the strumming from strings of the heart. If only…beautiful piece Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Alwi 😀 so good to see you ❤️
A singing heart…not much better than that. Beautiful, Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Gayle 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
What a beautiful invitation 🙂 ‘Let us beyond blue yonder tread’.
Thank you so much, Janice 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Everything about this is beautiful. I especially like: devour fodder that ignites our muse. I want to visit this magical place!
Awwww!❤️ Thank you so much, Lynn 😀 so glad you liked it!❤️
‘A lovely path you lead us on, Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Sarah 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Love such a wonderful place to be.. I hope there is
Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Beautiful! Sounds like my kind of place
Thank you so much, Eric 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
Your poem is a song without music, Sanaa! Where’s a guitar or piano when you need one?! 🙂
Awwww!❤️ Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you enjoyed it!❤️
Beautiful lines Sanaa…very refreshing!
Thank you so much, Sreeja 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
A worthy destination, wonderfully painted.
Thank you so much, Hedgewitch 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
I love this line: where sunshine pours like drops of gold ~
Thank you so much, Grace 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
This is a fascinating phrase, Sanaa — “beyond blue yonder tread”. Very nice.
Thank you so much, Misky 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Thank you for inviting us to this blissful place Sanaa ? xxx
Thank you for coming along 😉 so glad you liked it ❤️
I’m booking a ticket for that journey. Oh would that such a place existed!
Thank you so much, Beverly 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Where someone is not judged… that would be like lovely…bkm
Thank you so much, Barbara 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Sanaa, you would have loved our good old Hippy days. I do, still.
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I am absolutely certain I would have 😀 good to see you, Jim ❤️
I can hear your heart sing in this, Sanaa! Lovely words 🙂
Thank you so much, Lynn 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
‘Come listen to your heart and hear it sing.’
There is always light at the end of the tunnel if one cares to look for it. Very true Sanaa!
Hank
Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Hank 🙂
Fine bit of ephemera, this paper moon. Things that can’t be but are must be celebrated.
Awwww!❤️ Thank you so much, Brendan 😀 so glad you liked it!❤️
Near like an invitation to heaven. Who would refuse?
Thank you so much, Amaya 😀 so good to see you ❤️
If I ever found a place like that I wouldn’t budge from it.
Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Bekkie 😀
With the flow of your words, I was there.
Thank you so much, Martin 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
What a lovely place it is. I like the flow of words and rhythm of this. Well written piece as always.
Awww!❤️ Thank you so much, Imelda 😀 so good to see you!❤️
I’m in! Where do we buy our tickets from? 😉
LOL❤️ Thank you so much, Kunal 😀 so glad you liked it!❤️
Oh that sounds like a delightful place to find!
Thank you so much, Bryan 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️