Heart-song
Sanaa -
June 2, 2017
Earlier PoemsPoetry

Come with me, let us journey to a place,
where words they slice troubled waters,
where sunshine pours like drops of gold,
where a person isn’t judged by deeds or
past, where sorrow seems to live nor last.

Come with me, let us beyond blue yonder
tread, devour fodder that ignites our muse
long slept, where time’s uncertain and lets
loose its strings, where happiness blooms
as though Adonis in Spring.

‘Come listen to your heart and hear it sing.’

 

Photo credits: Pinterest

Posted for Fireblossom Friday @ Real Toads

also on Open Link Night @ dVerse Poets Pub

66 Responses

  1. Sherry Blue Sky says:
    June 2, 2017 at 6:52 am

    Let’s find a place like that……..where sorrow doesnt last and the muse is ignited! Mine definitely needs some help these days!

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  2. gillena says:
    June 2, 2017 at 7:09 am

    Oh definitely my soprano voice I can throw in there

    Thanks for a lovely fantasy place Sanaa

    Much love…

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  3. Fireblossom says:
    June 2, 2017 at 7:12 am

    That sounds like a fine place to be, Sunny.

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  4. Glenn Buttkus says:
    June 2, 2017 at 7:17 am

    Your sanctuary is lovely–and we poets could migrate there for residency. a beautiful port /where words slice troubled waters/, where muses awaken as needed, where sorrow has little to no dominion; smile.

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  5. Jennifer Wagner says:
    June 2, 2017 at 8:03 am

    I will definitely come! A lovely place and poem.

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  6. De Jackson says:
    June 2, 2017 at 8:08 am

    This is just a magical invitation:
    let us beyond blue yonder
    tread

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  7. thotpurge says:
    June 2, 2017 at 8:18 am

    need some muse igniting fodder for sure!!!

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  8. Mother Wintermoon says:
    June 2, 2017 at 8:57 am

    I enjoyed this calming safe space you’ve created with your words.

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  9. Alwi Shatry says:
    June 2, 2017 at 10:15 am

    While we “loose the strings…”, I can almost hear the strumming from strings of the heart. If only…beautiful piece Sanaa.

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  10. Gayle Walters Rose says:
    June 2, 2017 at 10:22 am

    A singing heart…not much better than that. Beautiful, Sanaa.

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  11. Janice says:
    June 2, 2017 at 10:39 am

    What a beautiful invitation 🙂 ‘Let us beyond blue yonder tread’.

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  12. Lynn says:
    June 2, 2017 at 11:02 am

    Everything about this is beautiful. I especially like: devour fodder that ignites our muse. I want to visit this magical place!

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  13. Sarah Russell says:
    June 2, 2017 at 11:38 am

    ‘A lovely path you lead us on, Sanaa.

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  14. Bjorn Rudberg says:
    June 2, 2017 at 11:58 am

    Love such a wonderful place to be.. I hope there is

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  15. Erbiage says:
    June 2, 2017 at 12:48 pm

    Beautiful! Sounds like my kind of place

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  16. Kim M. Russell says:
    June 2, 2017 at 4:09 pm

    Your poem is a song without music, Sanaa! Where’s a guitar or piano when you need one?! 🙂

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  17. Sreeja Harikrishnan says:
    June 2, 2017 at 4:16 pm

    Beautiful lines Sanaa…very refreshing!

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  18. hedgewitch says:
    June 2, 2017 at 8:00 pm

    A worthy destination, wonderfully painted.

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  19. Grace says:
    June 2, 2017 at 8:25 pm

    I love this line: where sunshine pours like drops of gold ~

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  20. Misky says:
    June 2, 2017 at 9:24 pm

    This is a fascinating phrase, Sanaa — “beyond blue yonder tread”. Very nice.

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  21. Xenia says:
    June 2, 2017 at 11:05 pm

    Thank you for inviting us to this blissful place Sanaa ? xxx

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  22. Bev says:
    June 2, 2017 at 11:18 pm

    I’m booking a ticket for that journey. Oh would that such a place existed!

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  23. bkmackenzie says:
    June 3, 2017 at 4:51 am

    Where someone is not judged… that would be like lovely…bkm

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  24. Jim says:
    June 3, 2017 at 7:00 am

    Sanaa, you would have loved our good old Hippy days. I do, still.
    ..

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  25. lynn says:
    June 3, 2017 at 9:22 am

    I can hear your heart sing in this, Sanaa! Lovely words 🙂

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  26. kaykuala h says:
    June 3, 2017 at 11:29 am

    ‘Come listen to your heart and hear it sing.’

    There is always light at the end of the tunnel if one cares to look for it. Very true Sanaa!

    Hank

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  27. Brendan says:
    June 3, 2017 at 7:14 pm

    Fine bit of ephemera, this paper moon. Things that can’t be but are must be celebrated.

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  28. Amaya says:
    June 3, 2017 at 11:44 pm

    Near like an invitation to heaven. Who would refuse?

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  29. Bekkie Sanchez says:
    June 4, 2017 at 12:14 am

    If I ever found a place like that I wouldn’t budge from it.

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  30. Martin Kloess says:
    June 4, 2017 at 5:51 am

    With the flow of your words, I was there.

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  31. Imelda says:
    June 4, 2017 at 9:03 am

    What a lovely place it is. I like the flow of words and rhythm of this. Well written piece as always.

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  32. Kunal says:
    June 5, 2017 at 7:49 pm

    I’m in! Where do we buy our tickets from? 😉

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  33. Bryan Ens says:
    June 5, 2017 at 8:33 pm

    Oh that sounds like a delightful place to find!

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