Heart-song

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Come with me, let us journey to a place,
where words they slice troubled waters,
where sunshine pours like drops of gold,
where a person isn’tΒ judged by deeds or
past, where sorrow seems to live nor last.

Come with me, let us beyond blue yonder
tread, devour fodder that ignites our muse
long slept, where time’s uncertain and lets
loose its strings, where happiness blooms
as though Adonis in Spring.

‘Come listen to your heart and hear it sing.’

 

Photo credits:Β Pinterest

Posted for Fireblossom Friday @ Real Toads

also on Open Link Night @ dVerse Poets Pub

Comments

  1. Let’s find a place like that……..where sorrow doesnt last and the muse is ignited! Mine definitely needs some help these days!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  2. gillena says:

    Oh definitely my soprano voice I can throw in there

    Thanks for a lovely fantasy place Sanaa

    Much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

      Much love…

  3. Fireblossom says:

    That sounds like a fine place to be, Sunny.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Shay πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

      (and thank you for the lovely prompt)

  4. Your sanctuary is lovely–and we poets could migrate there for residency. a beautiful port /where words slice troubled waters/, where muses awaken as needed, where sorrow has little to no dominion; smile.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww!❀️ Thank you so much, Glenn πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it! ❀️

  5. I will definitely come! A lovely place and poem.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jennifer πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  6. De Jackson says:

    This is just a magical invitation:
    let us beyond blue yonder
    tread

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, De πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  7. thotpurge says:

    need some muse igniting fodder for sure!!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rajani πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  8. I enjoyed this calming safe space you’ve created with your words.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Mother Wintermoon πŸ™‚ so glad you enjoyed it ❀️

  9. Alwi Shatry says:

    While we “loose the strings…”, I can almost hear the strumming from strings of the heart. If only…beautiful piece Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Alwi πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  10. Gayle Walters Rose says:

    A singing heart…not much better than that. Beautiful, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gayle πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  11. Janice says:

    What a beautiful invitation πŸ™‚ ‘Let us beyond blue yonder tread’.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Janice πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ❀️

  12. Lynn says:

    Everything about this is beautiful. I especially like: devour fodder that ignites our muse. I want to visit this magical place!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awwww!❀️ Thank you so much, Lynn πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it!❀️

  13. ‘A lovely path you lead us on, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sarah πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  14. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    Love such a wonderful place to be.. I hope there is

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bjorn πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  15. Erbiage says:

    Beautiful! Sounds like my kind of place

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Eric πŸ™‚ so good to see you ❀️

  16. Your poem is a song without music, Sanaa! Where’s a guitar or piano when you need one?! πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awwww!❀️ Thank you so much, Kim πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it!❀️

  17. Beautiful lines Sanaa…very refreshing!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sreeja πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  18. hedgewitch says:

    A worthy destination, wonderfully painted.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Hedgewitch πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  19. Grace says:

    I love this line: where sunshine pours like drops of gold ~

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Grace πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  20. Misky says:

    This is a fascinating phrase, Sanaa — “beyond blue yonder tread”. Very nice.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Misky πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  21. Xenia says:

    Thank you for inviting us to this blissful place Sanaa ? xxx

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you for coming along πŸ˜‰ so glad you liked it ❀️

  22. Bev says:

    I’m booking a ticket for that journey. Oh would that such a place existed!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Beverly πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  23. bkmackenzie says:

    Where someone is not judged… that would be like lovely…bkm

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Barbara πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  24. Jim says:

    Sanaa, you would have loved our good old Hippy days. I do, still.
    ..

    1. Sanaa says:

      I am absolutely certain I would have πŸ˜€ good to see you, Jim ❀️

  25. lynn says:

    I can hear your heart sing in this, Sanaa! Lovely words πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Lynn πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ❀️

  26. kaykuala h says:

    β€˜Come listen to your heart and hear it sing.’

    There is always light at the end of the tunnel if one cares to look for it. Very true Sanaa!

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❀️ thanks for stopping by, Hank πŸ™‚

  27. Brendan says:

    Fine bit of ephemera, this paper moon. Things that can’t be but are must be celebrated.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awwww!❀️ Thank you so much, Brendan πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it!❀️

  28. Amaya says:

    Near like an invitation to heaven. Who would refuse?

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Amaya πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  29. If I ever found a place like that I wouldn’t budge from it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❀️ thanks for stopping by, Bekkie πŸ˜€

  30. With the flow of your words, I was there.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Martin πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  31. Imelda says:

    What a lovely place it is. I like the flow of words and rhythm of this. Well written piece as always.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww!❀️ Thank you so much, Imelda πŸ˜€ so good to see you!❀️

  32. Kunal says:

    I’m in! Where do we buy our tickets from? πŸ˜‰

    1. Sanaa says:

      LOL❀️ Thank you so much, Kunal πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it!❀️

  33. Bryan Ens says:

    Oh that sounds like a delightful place to find!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bryan πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

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