Feel the music round hour of paling sunset
can you hear buoyant chirping of bluebirds
I balance delight as song engaged my mind
as blues carried along wings of velvet wind.
Feel the music round hour of perpetual rain
can you hear its pitter patter on joisted roof
I close my eyes and let my heartbeat thrum,
while spirit breathes in contemplation calm.
Without music our life is but a treasure lost.
Photo credits: Pixabay
Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United
Posted on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads
58 Responses
The very hours Nature sing into our heart…so beautifully captured…love the meditative tone of the poem…
Thank you so much, Sumana 😀 so glad you liked it❤️
nature does make the best music…
Definitely❤️ thanks for stopping by, Rajani 🙂
No music, no treasure. Ahh…
Definitely❤️ thanks for stopping by, MMT 🙂
So true. The music of Nature is so healing. It makes us fall in love with life.
A beautiful poem, Sanaa 🙂
Thank you so much, Purba❤️ so glad you liked it 😀
I love the “paling sunset”….and your wonderful closing line is just perfect.
Thank you so much, Sherry❤️ so glad you liked it 😀
Poems like this assure that we notice, awake, contemplate, participate. Thank you.
Thank you so much, Susan 🙂 so glad you liked it❤️
You express the presence of music in the world around us more eloquently than I ever could. From a musician, much respect.
Thank you so much, Scott 🙂 so glad you liked it❤️
“Without music our life is but a treasure lost.’
I enjoyed this poem very much
Thanks for dropping by to read mine
much love…
Thank you so much, Gillena ❤️ so good to see you 🙂
Much love back…❤️
Well I am sure we will all agree that “without music our life is but a treasure lost” and will match our mood juast as we want it. Beautifully written Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Robin 🙂 so glad you liked it❤️
Oh that last line says it all. Music is life. Hope you always enjoy it Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Myrna❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
And the words of your poem make music too!
Aw!❤️ thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 good to see you❤️
while spirit breathes in contemplation calm.
Without music our life is but a treasure lost.
Yes, very right Sanaa! Music is the connection across borders and not having limits to any age!
Hank
Thank you so much, Hank 😀 so glad you liked it❤️
I love how you carry the blue (s) throughout this musical feast 🙂
Thank you so much, Jae❤️ so glad you liked it 😀
Yes, there is music everywhere if we just listen.
Definitely❤️ thanks for stopping by, Annell 🙂
So true, music is really integral to our lives!!
Yes, indeed, a lost treasure without music.
Thank you so much, Mary 😀 so glad you liked it❤️
So very true – “Without music our life is nothing but a treasure lost”. Beautiful poem. Loved the picture too. Serene and calm. 🙂
Thank you so much, Dipanwita 🙂 so glad you liked it❤️
The music of nature and rain on the roof is indeed the best! Lovey poem.
Thank you so much, Bekkie 😀 so glad you liked it❤️
This is so beautiful. I love, ‘wings of velvet wind’.
Thank you so much, Sara 😀 so glad you liked it❤️
Nature sings for those who stop to listen!
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Rajani ❤️
This poem is very Keats….just beautiful. It would be good to hear it read by the same narrator who read “Ode to A Nightingale.”
Thank you so much, Cressida 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
The first line is a thing of beauty–I feel it! I feel all the wonderful things you’ve weaved into this poem… the colors dancing through the air, the sounds that touch the skin, the invitations to share the experience. Just yummy!❤️
Thank you so much, Magaly 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Such a feeling of serenity.
namaste
JzB
Thank you so much, JZ 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
This is so calming, I was transported to a quaint place 🙂
Thank you so much, Vandana 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
There is music everywhere if we but listen 😉 Love this.
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Paul ❤️
I can feel the music all the way through this – love the contrast of buoyant birds and falling rain.
Thank you so much, Laura 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Oh yes, music is treasure… Beautifully written poem.
Thank you so much, Susie 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Music is such an important part of life… I wonder how we would cope without it.
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Bjorn ❤️
The musicality of your verses echo the theme you so wonderfully evoke! Love it!
Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
‘Without music our life is but a treasure lost’ – how true, Sanaa.
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Kim ❤️