Feel the Music

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Feel the music round hour of paling sunset
can you hear buoyant chirping of bluebirds
I balance delight as song engaged my mind
as blues carried along wings of velvet wind.
Feel the music round hour of perpetual rain
can you hear its pitter patter on joisted roof
I close my eyes and let my heartbeat thrum,
while spirit breathes in contemplation calm.
Without music our life is but a treasure lost.

 

 

Photo credits: Pixabay

Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United

Posted on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads

Comments

  1. Sumana Roy says:

    The very hours Nature sing into our heart…so beautifully captured…love the meditative tone of the poem…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sumana 😀 so glad you liked it❤️

  2. thotpurge says:

    nature does make the best music…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely❤️ thanks for stopping by, Rajani 🙂

  3. Magical Mystical Teacher says:

    No music, no treasure. Ahh…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely❤️ thanks for stopping by, MMT 🙂

  4. So true. The music of Nature is so healing. It makes us fall in love with life.
    A beautiful poem, Sanaa 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Purba❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  5. I love the “paling sunset”….and your wonderful closing line is just perfect.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  6. Susan says:

    Poems like this assure that we notice, awake, contemplate, participate. Thank you.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Susan 🙂 so glad you liked it❤️

  7. DS Scott says:

    You express the presence of music in the world around us more eloquently than I ever could. From a musician, much respect.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Scott 🙂 so glad you liked it❤️

  8. gillena says:

    “Without music our life is but a treasure lost.’

    I enjoyed this poem very much

    Thanks for dropping by to read mine

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena ❤️ so good to see you 🙂

      Much love back…❤️

  9. Old Egg says:

    Well I am sure we will all agree that “without music our life is but a treasure lost” and will match our mood juast as we want it. Beautifully written Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Robin 🙂 so glad you liked it❤️

  10. Myrna says:

    Oh that last line says it all. Music is life. Hope you always enjoy it Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Myrna❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂

  11. And the words of your poem make music too!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aw!❤️ thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 good to see you❤️

  12. kaykuala h says:

    while spirit breathes in contemplation calm.
    Without music our life is but a treasure lost.

    Yes, very right Sanaa! Music is the connection across borders and not having limits to any age!

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Hank 😀 so glad you liked it❤️

  13. Jae Rose says:

    I love how you carry the blue (s) throughout this musical feast 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jae❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  14. annell4 says:

    Yes, there is music everywhere if we just listen.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely❤️ thanks for stopping by, Annell 🙂

  15. Mary says:

    So true, music is really integral to our lives!!
    Yes, indeed, a lost treasure without music.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Mary 😀 so glad you liked it❤️

  16. Dipanwita says:

    So very true – “Without music our life is nothing but a treasure lost”. Beautiful poem. Loved the picture too. Serene and calm. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Dipanwita 🙂 so glad you liked it❤️

  17. The music of nature and rain on the roof is indeed the best! Lovey poem.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bekkie 😀 so glad you liked it❤️

  18. Sara McNulty says:

    This is so beautiful. I love, ‘wings of velvet wind’.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sara 😀 so glad you liked it❤️

  19. Thotpurge says:

    Nature sings for those who stop to listen!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Rajani ❤️

  20. Cressida says:

    This poem is very Keats….just beautiful. It would be good to hear it read by the same narrator who read “Ode to A Nightingale.”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Cressida 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  21. The first line is a thing of beauty–I feel it! I feel all the wonderful things you’ve weaved into this poem… the colors dancing through the air, the sounds that touch the skin, the invitations to share the experience. Just yummy!❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Magaly 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  22. JazzBumpa says:

    Such a feeling of serenity.

    namaste
    JzB

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, JZ 🙂 so good to see you ❤️

  23. Vandana says:

    This is so calming, I was transported to a quaint place 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Vandana 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  24. Paul says:

    There is music everywhere if we but listen 😉 Love this.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Paul ❤️

  25. I can feel the music all the way through this – love the contrast of buoyant birds and falling rain.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Laura 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  26. Oh yes, music is treasure… Beautifully written poem.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Susie 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  27. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    Music is such an important part of life… I wonder how we would cope without it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Bjorn ❤️

  28. The musicality of your verses echo the theme you so wonderfully evoke! Love it!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  29. ‘Without music our life is but a treasure lost’ – how true, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Kim ❤️

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