Have you ever
felt something
you
couldnβt label?
Felt like
you couldnβt pinpoint as to where exactly
your thoughts are pointing?
Gently the moon
coaxes magic
from sky, as stream of consciousness leads
to driving his crimson ocean wildβ
it takes only a glance.
Photo credits: Fabian Perez Painting, Pinterest
De hosts today at dVerse and the word is ‘Stream.” Come join us! π
‘Gently the moon
coaxes magic
from sky’ – intoxicating words, Sanaa! Sometimes one glance is all it takes π
Thank you so much, Ingrid π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
What a fantastic title, Sanaa! So many possibilities, and LOVE that moon coaxing magic from sky. She’s a wily one!
Thank you so much, De π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
(and thank you for the glorious prompt) πΉ
Sanaa- Your words are delicious, and I love the image you have chosen.
Thank you so much, Linda π so good to see you πβ€οΈ
I love the image you chose to go with. I like the idea of the woman as the moon and the man as the crimson ocean being moved by her. Nicely done!
Thank you so much, Lisa π so glad the poem resonated with you πβ€οΈ
This became “Love at first bite”, how lust and infatuation can sweep us away, come hell or high water, come longevity or just a sweet night.
Thank you so much, Glenn π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
The indescribable flow of things. I like how your piece captures that tug.
Thank you so much, K. Hartless π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
I love your title, and the moon coaxing magic … for a while, at least!
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Wow. Moon magical
Muchπlove
Thank you so much, Gillena π so good to see you πβ€οΈ
Much love back …
Love that coaxy moon Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Ron π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
You haven’t lost your touch, dear Saana. I loved the image of “driving his crimson ocean wild”.
I’ve missed you all but right now the gentle moon has different plans for me. Glad I could pop in for this one.
Thank you so much, Victoria π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
it takes only a glance.
True enough Sanaa! It just takes a second. One need not have to bother too much when it comes streaming in.
Hank
Thank you so much, Hank π so glad the poem resonated with you πβ€οΈ
I really like this poem. Beautiful words.
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How tantalizing one look can be. I really like your ending on this one.
“as stream of consciousness leads
to driving his crimson ocean wildβ
it takes only a glance.”
Thank you so much, Alicia π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
That magnetic pull is everything! One glance is all it takes! ππ
Thank you so much, Tricia π so glad the poem resonated with you πβ€οΈ
“to driving his crimson ocean wildβ
it takes only a glance.”
Ooh it feels like that glance sparked thoughts of dark deeds that may yet become more thoughts
Thank you so much, Raivenne π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
moon coaxing magic deligthful
Thank you so much, Rog π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
That’s how it happens π
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So delicately done! I love it!
Thank you so much, Bigfancan π so good to see you πβ€οΈ
I think you write some of the best romantic, passionate poetry I’ve ever read. And that title is a killer!
That is such high praise! Thank you so much, Misky π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
~ wow ~ that’s beautiful, Sanaa!
yours,
David
Thank you so much, David π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
“Gently the moon
coaxes magic
from sky, as stream of consciousness leads”
Loved the descriptions here and the picture. π Great work, Sanaa!!
Thank you so much, Kitty π so glad the poem resonated with you πβ€οΈ
Perfect pairing of ‘the glance’ and your poetry! Beautifully ‘quadrilled.’
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Very pleasing to the senses. Loved it.
Thank you so much, Bill π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
Can’t pinpoint the feeling your heady verse evoked! Gorgeous.
Thank you so much, Punam π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
My pleasure. β€οΈ
You are an expert of coaxing magic from the Moon. Lovely Quadrille! π
Thank you so much, Helene π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
Blame it on the moon…
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Oh that magic moment! Wonderful Sanaa! βΊοΈππΊ
Thank you so much, Christine π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ