Carnations and probable outcomes

Have you ever
felt something
you
couldn’t label?
Felt like
you couldn’t pinpoint as to where exactly
your thoughts are pointing?
Gently the moon
coaxes magic
from sky, as stream of consciousness leads
to driving his crimson ocean wildβ€”
it takes only a glance.

 

 

 

 

Photo credits: Fabian Perez Painting, Pinterest

De hosts today at dVerse and the word is ‘Stream.” Come join us! πŸ’

Posted for Quadrille #132 “Your poem theme: Stream,” @dVerse Poets Pub

55 thoughts on “Carnations and probable outcomes

  1. Ingrid says:

    ‘Gently the moon
    coaxes magic
    from sky’ – intoxicating words, Sanaa! Sometimes one glance is all it takes πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ingrid πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  2. De Jackson says:

    What a fantastic title, Ingrid! So many possibilities, and LOVE that moon coaxing magic from sky. She’s a wily one!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, De πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

      (and thank you for the glorious prompt) 🌹

  3. Sanaa- Your words are delicious, and I love the image you have chosen.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda πŸ˜€ so good to see you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  4. msjadeli says:

    I love the image you chose to go with. I like the idea of the woman as the moon and the man as the crimson ocean being moved by her. Nicely done!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Lisa πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  5. This became “Love at first bite”, how lust and infatuation can sweep us away, come hell or high water, come longevity or just a sweet night.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Glenn πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  6. K.Hartless says:

    The indescribable flow of things. I like how your piece captures that tug.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, K. Hartless πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  7. Bev Crawford says:

    I love your title, and the moon coaxing magic … for a while, at least!

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  8. gillena says:

    Wow. Moon magical

    MuchπŸ’œlove

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena πŸ˜€ so good to see you πŸ’„β€οΈ

      Much love back …

  9. Love that coaxy moon Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ron πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  10. Victoria says:

    You haven’t lost your touch, dear Saana. I loved the image of “driving his crimson ocean wild”.
    I’ve missed you all but right now the gentle moon has different plans for me. Glad I could pop in for this one.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Victoria πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  11. it takes only a glance.
    True enough Sanaa! It just takes a second. One need not have to bother too much when it comes streaming in.

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Hank πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  12. I really like this poem. Beautiful words.

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  13. How tantalizing one look can be. I really like your ending on this one.
    “as stream of consciousness leads
    to driving his crimson ocean wildβ€”
    it takes only a glance.”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Alicia πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  14. That magnetic pull is everything! One glance is all it takes! πŸ‘πŸ‘

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Tricia πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  15. Raivenne says:

    “to driving his crimson ocean wildβ€”
    it takes only a glance.”
    Ooh it feels like that glance sparked thoughts of dark deeds that may yet become more thoughts

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Raivenne πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  16. rog leach says:

    moon coaxing magic deligthful

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rog πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  17. Jane Dougherty says:

    That’s how it happens πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  18. So delicately done! I love it!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bigfancan πŸ˜€ so good to see you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  19. Misky says:

    I think you write some of the best romantic, passionate poetry I’ve ever read. And that title is a killer!

    1. Sanaa says:

      That is such high praise! Thank you so much, Misky πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  20. crimson ocean

    ~ wow ~ that’s beautiful, Sanaa!

    yours,
    David

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, David πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  21. kittysverses says:

    “Gently the moon
    coaxes magic
    from sky, as stream of consciousness leads”

    Loved the descriptions here and the picture. πŸ™‚ Great work, Sanaa!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kitty πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  22. Helen says:

    Perfect pairing of ‘the glance’ and your poetry! Beautifully ‘quadrilled.’

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  23. Bill says:

    Very pleasing to the senses. Loved it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bill πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  24. Punam says:

    Can’t pinpoint the feeling your heady verse evoked! Gorgeous.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Punam πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

      1. Punam says:

        My pleasure. ❀️

  25. RedCat says:

    You are an expert of coaxing magic from the Moon. Lovely Quadrille! πŸ’–

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Helene πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  26. Kerfe says:

    Blame it on the moon…

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  27. Oh that magic moment! Wonderful Sanaa! β˜ΊοΈπŸ’•πŸŒΊ

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Christine πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

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