Carnations and probable outcomes

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Have you ever
felt something
you
couldn’t label?
Felt like
you couldn’t pinpoint as to where exactly
your thoughts are pointing?
Gently the moon
coaxes magic
from sky, as stream of consciousness leads
to driving his crimson ocean wild—
it takes only a glance.

 

 

 

 

Photo credits: Fabian Perez Painting, Pinterest

De hosts today at dVerse and the word is ‘Stream.” Come join us! 💝

Posted for Quadrille #132 “Your poem theme: Stream,” @dVerse Poets Pub

Comments

  1. Ingrid says:

    ‘Gently the moon
    coaxes magic
    from sky’ – intoxicating words, Sanaa! Sometimes one glance is all it takes 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ingrid 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️

  2. De Jackson says:

    What a fantastic title, Ingrid! So many possibilities, and LOVE that moon coaxing magic from sky. She’s a wily one!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, De 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️

      (and thank you for the glorious prompt) 🌹

  3. Sanaa- Your words are delicious, and I love the image you have chosen.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️

  4. msjadeli says:

    I love the image you chose to go with. I like the idea of the woman as the moon and the man as the crimson ocean being moved by her. Nicely done!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Lisa 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️

  5. This became “Love at first bite”, how lust and infatuation can sweep us away, come hell or high water, come longevity or just a sweet night.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Glenn 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️

  6. K.Hartless says:

    The indescribable flow of things. I like how your piece captures that tug.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, K. Hartless 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️

  7. Bev Crawford says:

    I love your title, and the moon coaxing magic … for a while, at least!

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❤️❤️❤️

  8. gillena says:

    Wow. Moon magical

    Much💜love

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️

      Much love back …

  9. Love that coaxy moon Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ron 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️

  10. Victoria says:

    You haven’t lost your touch, dear Saana. I loved the image of “driving his crimson ocean wild”.
    I’ve missed you all but right now the gentle moon has different plans for me. Glad I could pop in for this one.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Victoria 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️

  11. it takes only a glance.
    True enough Sanaa! It just takes a second. One need not have to bother too much when it comes streaming in.

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Hank 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️

  12. I really like this poem. Beautiful words.

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❤️❤️❤️

  13. How tantalizing one look can be. I really like your ending on this one.
    “as stream of consciousness leads
    to driving his crimson ocean wild—
    it takes only a glance.”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Alicia 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️

  14. That magnetic pull is everything! One glance is all it takes! 👏👏

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Tricia 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️

  15. Raivenne says:

    “to driving his crimson ocean wild—
    it takes only a glance.”
    Ooh it feels like that glance sparked thoughts of dark deeds that may yet become more thoughts

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Raivenne 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️

  16. rog leach says:

    moon coaxing magic deligthful

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rog 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️

  17. Jane Dougherty says:

    That’s how it happens 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❤️❤️❤️

  18. So delicately done! I love it!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bigfancan 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️

  19. Misky says:

    I think you write some of the best romantic, passionate poetry I’ve ever read. And that title is a killer!

    1. Sanaa says:

      That is such high praise! Thank you so much, Misky 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️

  20. crimson ocean

    ~ wow ~ that’s beautiful, Sanaa!

    yours,
    David

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, David 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️

  21. kittysverses says:

    “Gently the moon
    coaxes magic
    from sky, as stream of consciousness leads”

    Loved the descriptions here and the picture. 🙂 Great work, Sanaa!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kitty 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️

  22. Helen says:

    Perfect pairing of ‘the glance’ and your poetry! Beautifully ‘quadrilled.’

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❤️❤️❤️

  23. Bill says:

    Very pleasing to the senses. Loved it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bill 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️

  24. Punam says:

    Can’t pinpoint the feeling your heady verse evoked! Gorgeous.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Punam 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️

      1. Punam says:

        My pleasure. ❤️

  25. RedCat says:

    You are an expert of coaxing magic from the Moon. Lovely Quadrille! 💖

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Helene 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️

  26. Kerfe says:

    Blame it on the moon…

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❤️❤️❤️

  27. Oh that magic moment! Wonderful Sanaa! ☺️💕🌺

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Christine 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️

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