Have you ever
felt something
you
couldn’t label?
Felt like
you couldn’t pinpoint as to where exactly
your thoughts are pointing?
Gently the moon
coaxes magic
from sky, as stream of consciousness leads
to driving his crimson ocean wild—
it takes only a glance.
Photo credits: Fabian Perez Painting, Pinterest
De hosts today at dVerse and the word is ‘Stream.” Come join us! 💝
Posted for Quadrille #132 “Your poem theme: Stream,” @dVerse Poets Pub
55 Responses
‘Gently the moon
coaxes magic
from sky’ – intoxicating words, Sanaa! Sometimes one glance is all it takes 🙂
Thank you so much, Ingrid 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
What a fantastic title, Sanaa! So many possibilities, and LOVE that moon coaxing magic from sky. She’s a wily one!
Thank you so much, De 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
(and thank you for the glorious prompt) 🌹
Sanaa- Your words are delicious, and I love the image you have chosen.
Thank you so much, Linda 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
I love the image you chose to go with. I like the idea of the woman as the moon and the man as the crimson ocean being moved by her. Nicely done!
Thank you so much, Lisa 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
This became “Love at first bite”, how lust and infatuation can sweep us away, come hell or high water, come longevity or just a sweet night.
Thank you so much, Glenn 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
The indescribable flow of things. I like how your piece captures that tug.
Thank you so much, K. Hartless 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
I love your title, and the moon coaxing magic … for a while, at least!
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Wow. Moon magical
Much💜love
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
Much love back …
Love that coaxy moon Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Ron 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
You haven’t lost your touch, dear Saana. I loved the image of “driving his crimson ocean wild”.
I’ve missed you all but right now the gentle moon has different plans for me. Glad I could pop in for this one.
Thank you so much, Victoria 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
it takes only a glance.
True enough Sanaa! It just takes a second. One need not have to bother too much when it comes streaming in.
Hank
Thank you so much, Hank 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
I really like this poem. Beautiful words.
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How tantalizing one look can be. I really like your ending on this one.
“as stream of consciousness leads
to driving his crimson ocean wild—
it takes only a glance.”
Thank you so much, Alicia 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
That magnetic pull is everything! One glance is all it takes! 👏👏
Thank you so much, Tricia 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
“to driving his crimson ocean wild—
it takes only a glance.”
Ooh it feels like that glance sparked thoughts of dark deeds that may yet become more thoughts
Thank you so much, Raivenne 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
moon coaxing magic deligthful
Thank you so much, Rog 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
That’s how it happens 🙂
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So delicately done! I love it!
Thank you so much, Bigfancan 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
I think you write some of the best romantic, passionate poetry I’ve ever read. And that title is a killer!
That is such high praise! Thank you so much, Misky 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
~ wow ~ that’s beautiful, Sanaa!
yours,
David
Thank you so much, David 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
“Gently the moon
coaxes magic
from sky, as stream of consciousness leads”
Loved the descriptions here and the picture. 🙂 Great work, Sanaa!!
Thank you so much, Kitty 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Perfect pairing of ‘the glance’ and your poetry! Beautifully ‘quadrilled.’
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Very pleasing to the senses. Loved it.
Thank you so much, Bill 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Can’t pinpoint the feeling your heady verse evoked! Gorgeous.
Thank you so much, Punam 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
My pleasure. ❤️
You are an expert of coaxing magic from the Moon. Lovely Quadrille! 💖
Thank you so much, Helene 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Blame it on the moon…
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Oh that magic moment! Wonderful Sanaa! ☺️💕🌺
Thank you so much, Christine 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️