
I carry your smile like a secret letter,
folded
warm against my ribs.
It opens at dusk, spilling light
on my doubts,
teaching my hands patience,
my heart courage,
and every quiet night
how to love without asking,
while stars listen, believing us eternal.
Photo credits: Pinterest
De is our lovely hostess at dVerse where the word is “Smile.” Come join us! π΅
Posted for Quadrille #239: Smile! @dVerse Poets Pub

44 Responses
“how to love without asking”
LOVE this, especially!
Thank you so much, De π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
(and thank you for the lovely prompt) π₯
Such a smile is worth keeping and treasure… sounds perfect.
Thank you so much, Bjorn π so glad the poem resonated with you πβ€οΈ
That kind of smile is forever β€οΈ
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“I carry your smile like a secret letter” is so precious, Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Lisa π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
that smile is such a profound keepsake – beautiful composed Sanaa
Thank you so much, Laura π so glad the poem spoke to you πβ€οΈ
Bravo
Luv the warmth in your carried smile
πmuch love
Thank you so much, Gillena π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
A treasure!
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A beautiful treasure indeed!
Thank you so much, Christine π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
My hat is off. Marvelous smilecatch.
Thank you so much, Ron π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
A smile as a love letter. I like it.
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Sigh. Just sigh…..you continue to be the queen of romance!
Thank you so much, Lillian π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
Yes, this one is definitely sigh-worthy, Sanaa…a heart-throbbing smile.
Thank you so much, Lynn π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
Lovely poem.
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I love your eloquent post, Sanaa. Wonderful images!
Thank you so much, Dwight π so glad the poem resonated with you πβ€οΈ
Damn! So sensational.
Thank you so much, Mrityunjay π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
I love that you have created such an expansive story in so few words – Jae
Thank you so much, Jae π so glad the poem spoke to you πβ€οΈ
A gorgeous quadrille that made me smile through my tears, Sanaa, especially the thought of carrying a smile like a secret letter that βopens at dusk, spilling lightβ on doubts.
Aww gosh! Thank you so much, Kim π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
Gadzooks this is good!
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Ahhhh β¦ βwhile stars listenβ. Another beautiful poem from you Sanaa π₯°β€οΈ
Thank you so much, Christine π so glad you enjoyed it πβ€οΈ
So lovely and romantic, Sanaa–that secret letter smile,
“It opens at dusk, spilling light
on my doubts,”–a winning smile indeed. β€οΈ
Thank you so much, Merril π so glad the poem spoke to you πβ€οΈ
“how to smile without asking”
Beautiful poem, Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Sara π so glad you liked it πβ€οΈ
Courage and patience, yes! What a beautiful poem Sanaa, poignant.
So, so beautiful, Sanaa! Love the opening line. ππ