Among the clouds
there rests a memory of you,
deep in thought
as concentration
brings about a change in brow.
I crave your mouth
the deep sigh
that escapes from the corner
of eloquent lips
and wonder if it’s too early
for a kiss–
Photo credits: Pinterest
Posted for ‘Quadrille #67’ @dVerse Pub
And on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads
54 Responses
Maybe or maybe not. Doesn’t hurt to check it out, smiles. Thanks for joining in.
Thank you so much, Grace 😀 so good to see you ❤️
A question i have pondered a few times. I really liked your voice and the sincere presentation of thought.
Thank you so much, Henri 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Very nice – erotic.
Thank you so much, V.J 😀 so good to see you ❤️
This autumn moon has got the romantics reining😊. Nice.
Pat R
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Pat ❤️
One sensuous kiss will tell you all you need to know…
Thank you so much, Truedessa 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Never too early for a kiss!!!
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Toni ❤️
A dream that becomes vividly present 🙂
Thank you so much, Janice 😀 so good to see you ❤️
That’s a sweet quadrille, Sanaa, and so romantic, especially:
‘I crave your mouth
the deep sigh
that escapes from the corner
of eloquent lips’.
And I agree with Toni – it’s never too early for a kiss!
Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
(and thank you for the lovely prompt)
craving the mouth that you know will have the sweetest kiss – no not too early at all – such a beautiful feeling when i read this
Thank you so much, Gina 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
What a beautiful love poem Sanaa, never regret stealing that first kiss.
Thank you so much, Robin 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Ah, when can it ever be too early for a kiss? Ha!
I could feel the hesitation and the desire in your words, having experienced it in its many forms — I loved the setting and the sweet, sweet romanticism.
Such a lovely poem, Sanaa! 🙂
Awww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Anmol 😀 so glad you liked it! ❤️
Never too early for a kiss! 🙂
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Rajani ❤️
Never a wrong time for a kiss. To brow, to hand, to lips.
Thank you so much, Yvonne 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Mmm…that ache when one wonders and waits to be sure of their moment. And oh, the bliss when the moment finally comes.
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Rommy ❤️
I would say, it is never too early for a kiss!
Thank you so much, Annell 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Nice last two lines about it being too early for a kiss.
Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Ah, constant craving 🙂
Definitely 😉 thanks for stopping by, Marian ❤️
I agree with Annell- never too early for a kiss. Beautiful and eloquent Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Linda 😀 so good to see you ❤️
I like the idea of a memory of someone special being held in the clouds – which implies both a slight darkness for longing, but not necessarily a full-out storm; there is a subtle softness in this poem and it ends with that pseudo day-dreaming, mesmerizing effect of watching the sky and wondering, and yearning. Crisp ending for the want of a kiss.
Thank you so much, Pat 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
I think if both feel the same it’s never to early to kiss… but alas sometimes it’s too late.
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Bjorn ❤️
A beautiful dream in a beautiful poem Sanaa! That picture is heavenly!
Thank you so much, Carrie 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Beautifully erotic and evocative, Sanaa! 🙂
Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Lovely poem, tenderly romantic in its musing. and beautiful image. Nicely done.
Thank you so much, Dorianna 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Oh my. With words as eloquent as these, I just hope it’s not too late for that kiss. 🙂
Loved this.
Thank you so much, Barry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
You write about memories and then is it too early for a kiss? Makes me think one has met up with an old flame…
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Margaret ❤️
From the opening line to the final word, I was captivated.
Thank you so much, Kerry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
From title to finish, I thought this was beautiful in imagery, sensuousness and phrasing.
Thank you so much, Mish 😀 so good to see you ❤️