Aubade beginning in lilac tones and coy exchange

I almost always take the lead; owing to fire in blood
and stardust in bones,
words falling from mouth,
detecting hints of devilry in lilac tones and coy exchange,
it’s inevitable,
for morning is persistent that lovers partβ€”
blades of grass and glistening dew,
there is something to be said
about evaporation that takes place between two people
in a single room.

What is it that men and women require?
Besides smoke that lingers long after contact is broken,
a delightful disorder,
I am aware of prayer of body calling me to rise,
a perfect design,
that thrills me far beyond poetry can explain,
the softer side of sun,
as feeling makes its way into the constricts of ribcage,
I implore you; do not beguile me more than I already am.

The careless clouds, pale stones and warm wind
bear witness, as slowly
the hours pass into nothingness

and memory takes us for a trip down its lane,
I somewhat
like having the knowledge
that he has no choice
but to belong, rosier lips
admiring and instructing
in equal measure,
there is a sweetness to the sting that pleasure carries
in its wake,
I find that I am never the answer but question
that he ends up asking himselfβ€”
dark globes of chandelier mirroring everything
that is evident;
is this something you can hope to live without?
Just then, the window at the end of the hallway throws
itself open.

 

 

 

Photo credits: Dark room with opened window, pexels

An early unveiling of the April Poem-a-Day Challenge, Day 8 πŸ₯ 

Laura is our lovely hostess at dVerse where she invites us to write an Aubade.
Come join us! ❀️

Posted for MTB: Morning has broken @dVerse Poets Pub

20 thoughts on “Aubade beginning in lilac tones and coy exchange

  1. Ingrid says:

    Beautiful and heady with the scent of romance, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ingrid πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  2. you certainly have stardust and fire in your poetry Sanaa – a wonderful read full of stark and vivid imager and best of all a peppering of the unexpected like “blades of grass and glistening dew,”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww gosh! Thank you so much, Laura πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it! πŸ’„β€οΈ

      (and thank you for the glorious prompt) 🌹

  3. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    So much fire in your blood and you sparkle with stardust

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bjorn πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  4. a. h. starlingsson says:

    Oh la la.. as some say…Sanaa I might have said words similar to ‘this is you at your highest eloquence’…but this verse is just fabulous…..I mean if poetry could replace food, and provide the right tastes and nutrients…this is the poem that does, my proof of this is I did not get to eat since dawn, and now feel I do not need to..wonderful, wonderful verse…just enough of everything…and thank goodness no ketchup involved in your words…

    1. Sanaa says:

      That is such high praise! Thank you so much, Ain πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  5. I am so touched that Ain, midst the landscape of war, still finds time for poetry; a proof of its potency. This piece is languid, yet dusky, dripping with ardor. The fire in your blood, the power in your intimacy is nothing short of miraculous.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww gosh! Thank you so much, Glenn πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  6. Tzvi Fievel says:

    “I implore you; do not beguile me more than I already am.”
    This line is reminiscent of a verse from Song of Songs.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Tzvi πŸ˜€ so good to see you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  7. lynn says:

    Fabulous aubade for lovers, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Lynn πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  8. Punam says:

    Your verses are heady with the sparkle of stardust, Sanaa! Gorgeous imagery! ❀️❀️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Punam πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  9. As always, there is phrase after phrase that just nails the elusive that we all think we know, but can never quite articulate:
    “for morning is persistent that lovers part”

    “there is a sweetness to the sting that pleasure carries in its wake”

    And then the unexpected intrusion of reality at the end.

    Love it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Alexandra πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  10. Gillena Cox says:

    “to fire in blood
    and stardust in bones,”
    Your words are just awesome. Luv this image.

    MuchπŸ’œlove

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

      Much love back..

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