airborne

 

Photo credits: Lifestyle

Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United

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28 Responses

  1. Thotpurge says:

    let go and align with journeying clouds… lovely…

  2. Magical Mystical Teacher says:

    I hope you never lose your sense of enthusiasm that this poem so charmingly conveys.

  3. Susan says:

    Everything about this is delightful–form, images, the complete rush of it!

  4. Sumana Roy says:

    Whew! thanks for the flight…enjoyed thoroughly the swaying moments and the amazement 🙂

  5. LOL, I love that unexpected closing! This was wonderful to read and envision.

  6. gillena says:

    Your end line made me smile, i enjoyed this exhilaration of flight

    much love…

  7. panchali says:

    That was fantastic, Sanaa! The journey felt like a dream. …I hope i have such dreams recurrently 🙂 ❤️

  8. Myrna says:

    Yes, life IS much like aviation. What a treat! Enjoyed your poem. I like how you slanted the lines, to give the feel of flight.

  9. Rob says:

    Ha, ha. I see some humor here in the amazing experience of flying, that sometimes gets overlooked in our modern world.

  10. Mary says:

    You have captured the feeling of flying so beautifully.
    And, ha, it is fun to look down and recognize somewhere…..like Spain. Smiles.

  11. Old Egg says:

    I think on every flight there still is that wonder, that feeling of disbelief that you are actually miles high above the earth and that is not the safest place to be!

  12. Jae Rose says:

    I love the excitement in this Sanaa – and of course the shape and photo..makes me want to book a flight 🙂

  13. Eric says:

    Your way with passion could sway me. Lovely lines and afresh perspective

  14. Nicholas V. says:

    Ha! Loved it, especially the last line.

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