Comments

  1. Thotpurge says:

    let go and align with journeying clouds… lovely…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Rajani❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂

  2. Magical Mystical Teacher says:

    I hope you never lose your sense of enthusiasm that this poem so charmingly conveys.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, MMT ❤️ so good to see you 🙂

  3. Susan says:

    Everything about this is delightful–form, images, the complete rush of it!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Susan ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  4. Sumana Roy says:

    Whew! thanks for the flight…enjoyed thoroughly the swaying moments and the amazement 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sumana❤️ so good to see you 😀

  5. LOL, I love that unexpected closing! This was wonderful to read and envision.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry 😀 I enjoyed writing it ❤️

  6. gillena says:

    Your end line made me smile, i enjoyed this exhilaration of flight

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂

  7. panchali says:

    That was fantastic, Sanaa! The journey felt like a dream. …I hope i have such dreams recurrently 🙂 ❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Panchali ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  8. Myrna says:

    Yes, life IS much like aviation. What a treat! Enjoyed your poem. I like how you slanted the lines, to give the feel of flight.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Myrna ❤️ so good to see you 😀

  9. Rob says:

    Ha, ha. I see some humor here in the amazing experience of flying, that sometimes gets overlooked in our modern world.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Rob 🙂

  10. Mary says:

    You have captured the feeling of flying so beautifully.
    And, ha, it is fun to look down and recognize somewhere…..like Spain. Smiles.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Mary ❤️ I really enjoyed writing this one 😉

  11. Old Egg says:

    I think on every flight there still is that wonder, that feeling of disbelief that you are actually miles high above the earth and that is not the safest place to be!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Robin ❤️

  12. Jae Rose says:

    I love the excitement in this Sanaa – and of course the shape and photo..makes me want to book a flight 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jae 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  13. Eric says:

    Your way with passion could sway me. Lovely lines and afresh perspective

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Eric 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  14. Nicholas V. says:

    Ha! Loved it, especially the last line.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Nicholas 😀 so glad you liked it❤️

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