October’s dew spangled beauty ―
alongside gold and auburn dreams
cuts through ever’y doubt and pain
round corners of gelid winter sings.
Stunned, I watch with breath abate
as critique and pen accumulate ―
bear witness to my soul (solace)
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Posted on Sunday Mini Challenge @ Real Toads
& Posted on Monday Writes @ My Blog – Verses
Also posted on the Poetry Pantry @ Poets United
50 Responses
I simply love the idea of October healing through hurt… and crafting natural art as it does it. This is lovely to read and imagine, Sanaa. ❤️
Thank you so much, Magaly ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀
October has a hand that soothes… something we need these days.
Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Bjorn 🙂
So good to visit, thanks for posting.
seasons close
ever the birth of others
natures egg
Thank you kindly, Magyar 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
I love the gold and auburn dreams.
Thank you so much, Sherry ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀
Stunning in its beauty – you give such rich images of October in a few exquisite words. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much, Stacie ❤️ so glad you liked it.
I like the “pen accumulate” and think we should sing this spangled song over the one about war.
Thank you so much, Colleen ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
Love the ‘dew spangled beauty’
Thank you kindly, Candy ❤️ good to see you 🙂
I’m glad you have her in a happy mood, singing. Probably she is singing the Happy Birthday Song to me towards the end of her month. Nicely written.
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Thank you kindly, Jim 🙂 good to see you ❤️
I felt your poem in the “souls” of my feet!
Thank you so much, Annell ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
I watch with breath abate
as critique and pen accumulate
One has to accept it in the hope it helps to create good feelings
Hank
Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Hank 🙂
Luv how you bless October with your words and wishes
“October’s dew spangled beauty ―
alongside gold and auburn dreams”
Thank you for linking this gem to Monday WRites
much love…
My pleasure Gillena ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀
Much love..❤️
dew spangled beauty ―
alongside gold and auburn dreams……that is so lovely
Thank you so much, Debi ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀
sort of a star spangled banner for October
Thank you kindly, Angie ❤️ good to see you 🙂
Each month has its charm but October alone waves goodbye tears falling in the hope we will meet again. Beautifully written Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Robin 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
A song of healing…a beautiful October thought
Thank you so much, Susie ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
Dew spangled… lovely image.
Thank you kindly, Rajani ❤️
I love this song – it feels more like an internal one – content and thankful
Thank you so much, Jae ❤️ so nice to see you 🙂
Rarely have you shown such sorow and acceptance at once! I see that October has indeed accumulated in your pen. Gorgeous writing.
Thank you so much, Susan 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
Autumn is the perfect season to write poetry … a touch of melancholy and soothing words … lovely ❤️
Thank you so much, Loredana 🙂 good to see you ❤️
Lovely autumn imagery here, Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Mary ❤️ good to see you 🙂
You had me hooked after the first two beautiful lines..
Thank you so much, Truedessa ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
Love the feeling throughout this which depicts autumn, my favorite season. Lovely writing Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Myrna ❤️ good to see you 🙂
“gold and auburn dreams” … sigh … lovely.
Thank you kindly, Wendy ❤️
You make it sound magical!
Thank you so much, Rosemary ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀
indeed a song! rich imagery and a soothing rhyme.
enjoyed the poem! 🙂
Thank you so much, dsnake 🙂 good to see you.