I’ll always check the roses for snakes in future! It is bad enough with biting insects but now you tell me it is even more dangerous. What a vivid imagination you have Sanaa.
‘rosebuds kiss the tender inwards of her hands’ – I have never trusted roses and your eerie poem will ensure that I never will, Sanaa! Much love, Kim x
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I’ll always check the roses for snakes in future! It is bad enough with biting insects but now you tell me it is even more dangerous. What a vivid imagination you have Sanaa.
Thank you so much Robin 🙂 so glad you liked the poem.
Wow your ghost is scary kind. Dramatic mood ; Nice write
A happy weekend to you Sanaa
much love…
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀
Happy weekend to you too.
xo
As a regular victim I love this blood hungry bloom 😀 XXX
Thank you so much, Gina ❤️
I think the following lines is so good. “Desire drapes itself unto shades of night” another very enjoyable read, thanks, Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Julian 🙂
The fear feels real and the desire,,, sometimes beauty betrays us,,, a powerful poem,,
Thank you so much, Ellecee ❤️ so glad you liked it.
Your poem makes me want to reread Carmilla. Love the eeriness, the shock, the things are not says but are so clear…
Thank you so much Magaly 😀 so glad you liked it. ❤️
I like where you took me in this poem Sanaa….so nicely done…if I could whistle I would!!
Thank you so much, Michael 😀
Moody and dreamlike, in a wonderfully unsettling way.
Thanks Rommy ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
Blistering the forearm of fear is a powerful image.. perhaps symbolic? if not literal..Another impassioned and bold poem 🙂
Thank you so much, Jae ❤️
Wow! This is beautiful dark poetry. The amazing image goes perfectly with this piece too.
Thank you so much, Josslyn ❤️
‘rosebuds kiss the tender inwards of her hands’ – I have never trusted roses and your eerie poem will ensure that I never will, Sanaa! Much love, Kim x
Thank you so much, Kim 🙂 so glad you liked the poem. xo
“Desire drapes itself unto shades of night”…wow what a line! best for the scary rose i think….
Thank you so much, Sumana ❤️ so glad you liked it.