Untitled (a lady writing in detail)

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Word count, syllables, symbolism
perhaps something related to sea.
Line breaks feeling as though one
taking a walk along the sidelines.

Breathe its not just about similes,
pour your heart into your sonnet.
Every inch of me yearned for love
that bursts unto sky as fireworks!

This I give to you, a poem written
from the depths of my chaste soul.
Yet drops of rain and burning ash
speak of desires that were untold.


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30 thoughts on “Untitled (a lady writing in detail)

    • Sanaa says:

      Awwwww!❀️ Thank you so much, Kerry πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it!❀️

      (and thank you for the challenging prompt)

  1. Rene says:

    I love the idea of talking a walk instead of taking a walk — especially when talking to myself. πŸ™‚

    The last stanza is mighty powerful, girl.

  2. victoria says:

    Soulful, deeply stirring and beautiful! Such wonderful writing… I could feel as though this could be a song, such beautiful lyrics ! Just feels very moving and strong ! Love this!

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