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Hark! bloweth life,
Into a stone.
Nay! Thy heart,
Doth I disown.
Thou art a votary,
To fond desire.
Tis passion of late,
Which thee conspire.
Thy passion is such,
As fiery ember!
Thee scent,
Tis fathoms,
Suave lavender!
Hark! bloweth life,
Into a stone.
Beguile thy senses,
With bourguignon.
Ye riveting gaze,
Much like a maze.
Setting thy heart,
Thoroughly ablaze!
Tis passion which sets,
Thy life asunder.
Lying awake into the night,
Reminiscing thee,
With sheer delight!
Hark! bloweth life,
Into a stone.
Nay! Thy heart,
Doth I disown.
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Posted for Poetry Pantry @ Poets United
You are being hard on him. Did he come on too hot and strong?
Hello Old Egg,
Thanks for stopping by.. (giggles) well yes he sort of did.. but this poem depicts my passionate nature as a person.
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Well, this is quite a poem. Quite professional in tone.
Hello Mary,
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Kinda feel like I’m in a Shakespeare play! :p
Hello Kerridwen,
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Appreciate your warmth & kindness 🙂
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me too! Love this one–the language you use, the meter and rhyme. This is a great poem!
Hello Melinda,
Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
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I like the refraining first and last lines ~
Hello Grace,
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I too was reminded of Shakespeare in the tone and use of language.
Hello Gabriella,
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A nod to times past which present eternal problems..love, life…and everything in between!
Hello Jae Rose,
Thank you so much! You interpret my poetry really well 😀
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Oh I love how you used archaic language in a modern form.. the short lines really add a serious tone to this modern day of passionate independence.
Hello Bjorn,
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The Old World language thou hast express’st hither dost remind me of how I started in poetry from years of yore. I used to write Sonnets back then under this language, but no longer today. I thank thee for the mem’ries.
Hello Kelvin,
Thou art most kind! 😀
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“Ye riveting gaze, / Much like a maze. / Setting thy heart,/ Thoroughly ablaze!…this has been the story from time immemorial…
Hello Sumana
Yes its quite the dream isn’t it? 😀
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Just love it, and the old English is an added charm
Hello Vandana,
So nice of you to stop by 😀
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Many spirited passions, like strong winds, fighting for direction towards their destination.
Fiery, indeed!
Poppy
Hello Poppy,
So kind of you! 😀
I knew you would like it 😀
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I really enjoyed the Olde English in this poem – and the rhythm and rhyme….fun to read. I enjoyed the breathing life into a stone, and smiled at “Beguile thy senses, With bourguignon.”
Hello Sherry,
I knew you would like it 😀
Thanks for your warm remarks.. 😀
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A passionate nature indeed…
‘Thy passion is such,
As fiery ember!
Ye scent,
Tis fathoms,
Suave lavender!’
Love the form and rhyme.
Hello Donna,
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Lots of passion with an early English vibe conveyed well in your piece, Sunny.
Hello Jennifer,
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absolutely lovely in form and words. there’s tenderness in each line. the use of old words is an idication that these words are timeless.
Hello Totomai,
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Agree with Jae and Bjorn – the use of classic language lent an air of lightness to eternal questions and burning passions.
Hello Pearl,
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So kind of you to say so.. 😀
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Enjoyed your poem ~ it does sound like Shakespeare, beautifully written and full of passion indeed 🙂
Hello Loredana,
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Reminds me of an Emily Dickinson Poem where Heart argues with mind, though you may mean for this to be too people. Nicely done.
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Such a chic way of Olde English writing Sanaa! It brings back the memories of reading Shakespeare of days gone by!
Hank
Hello Kaykuala,
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Sanaa,
This has the feel and the sentiment of an Olde English love poem..A reading from a staged play. Very vivid language..
Eileen
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Excellent
Hello Sir,
Thank you 🙂
Highly appreciated.
This certainly has fire and passion and how great that it’s an expression of your personality. The old English makes it sound even stronger. I enjoyed this so much.
Hello Myrna,
Thank you so much! Means alot to me 😀
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watch those rogue sparks
for in the moment passions turn
and two hearts afire
in a smolder burn
I love your Lit influence here 🙂
Hello Leslie
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A wonderful poem, great job using the older language.
Hello Mr Meisner,
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what a sultry, romantic write! love the quick flow and the rhyme scheme.
enjoyable read!
Hello Stacy,
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xoxo