Conviction

So often heart’s restless as southern wind,
won’t you offer solace, soothe with whisper 
World’s a scene of blood, wine and bedlam
come savor oh thoughts that remind of love. 
Though night’s emblem of darkness of soul, 
there are times when my mind rejects dolor; 
figure everything moral leads one to You.

 

Photo credits: Jolygram

Inspired by writings of Dante Alighieri, Flash 55 Plus
poem (chosen from works) -There is a gentle thought-

Posted for Play it again @ Real Toads

and on Poetry Pantry @ Poets United 

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54 Responses

  1. Some days, we need the soothing… that can only be offered by night.

  2. Jim says:

    It’s easy to dwell on the miseries, isn’t it? But there are times and moods when we seek the more pleasant and reassuring. I’m glad you wrote this, Sanaa. Good for the ‘heart’.
    ..

  3. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    we need that connection to live.

  4. Thotpurge says:

    wonder if the night soothes the restless heart or exacerbates its ache!!

  5. Kerry O'Connor says:

    come savor oh thoughts that remind of love.

    I love the classical flavour of this line. We should allow ourselves to be reminded of love all the time.

  6. Old Egg says:

    In think there is nothing better than a sympathetic ear when suffering dolor and talking your troubles through with a true friend. Love lets you cope with most problems.

  7. Jae Rose says:

    Belief and conviction can soothe the heart – a good thing to hold onto in sad times

  8. World’s a scene of blood, wine and bedlam
    come savor oh thoughts that remind of love.

    The current world situation is not too good. One would welcome any overtures of feelings of friendship

    Hank

  9. soothing is the night for all to see, feel its ‘doler’ sleep
    for we all need this balance in our keep
    to laugh, to cry to walk, to fall
    we need it all

    gracias Sanaa, such youthful wisdom

  10. OT says:

    Definite undertones of the romantics here. well expressed, nice.

  11. Ah night….

    the time for lovers and writers.

    Lovely writing. 🙂

  12. I like the description of a heart restless as a southern wind.

  13. gillena says:

    Sanaa have a nice Sunday.
    In your courtship of solace, I like a lot this line
    “come savor oh thoughts that remind of love. ”

    Much love…

  14. Julian says:

    Full of gentle smoothness tying together the begining to the end. Always enjoy reading your poetry.

  15. ayala says:

    Intense and lovely .

  16. Sometimes, we just need to find the light I think–even when things are like bedlam–Lots of hope for the future of mankind in this piece for me today!

  17. ZQ says:

    Happy New year Sanaa, looks like you’re starting on the foot 🙂
    or should I say with an interesting and creative piece
    ZQ

  18. Wendy Bourke says:

    Some lovely lines in this … “soothe with whisper” is so-o-o-o evocative and tender.

  19. Heather says:

    Always looking for that muse or inspiration or whatever takes us to that mindset as writers- I can identify so much. Well done.

  20. kaykuala h says:

    World’s a scene of blood, wine and bedlam
    come savor oh thoughts that remind of love.

    There are so many conflicts and destruction that one feels helpless and crave for peace, any kind of solution!

    Hank

  21. gillena says:

    Thank you for linking in to Monday WRites Sanaa

    ❤️

    much love…

  22. dsnake1 says:

    exquisite lines, Sanaa. there’s such a classical feel to it.
    ah, conviction can lead one out of the darkest nights. 🙂

  23. Bkmackenzie says:

    It is true bedlam out there and reflection on the source of our being is what is important at this time… you call us to that with this piece, thank you…bkm

  24. Magical Mystical Teacher says:

    Rejecting dolor seems like both a noble and necessary thing to do.

  25. Even “blood, wine and bedlam” sound romantic. I had to look up dolor.

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