Voice of Nature

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I listen to the voice of Nature’s soul;
The leaves in autumn shine like gold.
The calming breeze soothes the nerves;
What more of miracle could be told.

The leaves in autumn shine like gold;
I half forget how time has flown.
What more of miracle could be told;
How Nature affects the young and old.

I half forget how time has flown;
The calming breeze soothes the nerves.
How Nature affects the young and old;
I listen to the voice of Nature’s soul.

 

 

Photo Credits:Β 1ms.net

Form: Β Pantoum

Posted for Poetics @ dVerse Poets Pub

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Comments

  1. X says:

    Nature has an old soul, and relating nature to a mother is fitting as she cares for us whenever we come. And no matter how long it is between our visits. Effective use of form too, as nature often seems to move in cycles.

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  2. Victoria says:

    Using the pantoum as a form for this poem seems to echo the peaceful scene you paint. Beautiful.

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  3. Grace says:

    Very soothing to listen to nature’s voice ~ Lovely work on the pantoum form too ~

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  4. Delaina says:

    Absolutely beautiful! Cheers!

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  5. CC says:

    “the voice of Nature’s soul”—I like this line, and the repetition of it in your poem….I hear the voice of Nature’s soul as soothing and healing. Thank you for adding your voice to this prompt, Sanaa πŸ™‚

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  6. Candy says:

    beautiful words, beautiful image, beautiful form!

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  7. magyar says:

    Hi Sunny,
    __How time has flown… such a warm vision and spurring verse! It seems that just last week I was 12 years old, but realistic accounting points to… 65 years ago.
    __My humble echo, as the leaves fall too_.

    far waterfall
    fills this forest pond
    golden leaves
    _m

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  8. One of the most “natural” pantoums I’ve ever read; a very cleverr & imaginative take on the prompt; nice work.

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  9. Kanzensakura says:

    It is nice to see this form, so new to us. You did a lovely job and the message is so clear and true

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  10. Truedessa says:

    I think it is good to listen to the voice of Nature’s soul..I am sure nature has a lot to offer us in these moments of contemplation.

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  11. Mary says:

    Your poem has expressed well the calming effects of nature.

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  12. Rythaephua says:

    That photo really depicts your title, nice one.

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  13. Sumana Roy says:

    “What more of miracle could be told”…nature is just that…this form suits your content so perfectly….

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  14. billgncs says:

    very well executed – this was natural and smooth.

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  15. Beautiful! I love the pantoum and it works quite well for this topic. I think that the key to a great pantoum is crafting the right first line, which becomes the last line. You have done just that. Peace, Linda

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  16. “What more of miracle could be told”…..beautiful writing, Sanaa.

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  17. Bryan Ens says:

    “The calming breeze soothes the nerves;
    What more of miracle could be told.”
    – indeed, it is miraculous how soothing nature can be. Lovely pantoum!

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  18. shamsud A says:

    I absolutely loved the poem. I listen to the voice of Nature’s soul. Yes! agree. Nature inspires us in its own way

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  19. Shawna says:

    “I listen to the voice of Nature’s soul”

    Oh my goodness! This is such a beautiful opening line. I love this. Yes, we should wake up every morning with this state of mind, just embracing nature’s soul with ours. I just adore this!

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