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  1. CC says:

    Love this, Sanaa…the optimism in this and the message inherent even in the brevity of the cinquain. Lovely.

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  2. Manicddaily says:

    A very cute cinquain–the couple that persists against obstacles must be fervent indeed. Thanks, Sanaa. k.

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  3. Sumana Roy says:

    a great truth effortlessly expressed in so few words…a lovely write Sanaa…

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  4. Suyash_J says:

    Time is the ultimate touchstone.

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  5. Beautiful, Sanaa. This is so true. I loved the form of the poem. Have a great Sunday πŸ™‚

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  6. Bjorn says:

    Those obstacles should be viewed as blessings, opportunities to improve.. That’s what a relationship should be.

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  7. Old Egg says:

    True love is a formidable beast and will battle all foes.

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  8. Kerry O'Connor says:

    You have captured the fervour of making the most of time.

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  9. Time are fuel in the fire of relationships, indeed. And sometime, it’s wind gust… But we always have the choice of how we guide this forces.

    Such a tasty wee bit.

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  10. X says:

    If you work at it…

    time alone will not make a good soup,
    it has to have the right ingredients in it.
    What we allow into our marriage/love
    and what we take out – def makes all
    the difference.

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  11. and may it be so.. lovely.

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  12. Grace says:

    So true Sanaa, challenges will always be there in every relationship ~ It is up to us to let it continually bloom ~

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  13. Mary says:

    Ah, a relationship can survive obstacles…if both people wish it to survive & put in the effort.

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  14. blogoratti says:

    Time is everything, love develops and reality sets in. Greetings!

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  15. totomai says:

    Obstacles are recipe for a much flavorful relationship, Sanaa. it takes time to learn the pros and cons πŸ™‚

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  16. L. Moon says:

    Excellent – I think short verse is amazing. It says so much with so little.
    Classic Sunny one!!!

    xoxox

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  17. I think we forget that time and love and work cover a lot of ground in a relationship–loved this beautiful write

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  18. No obstacle too steep, if the will is there!

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  19. Marvelous Cinquain….time is so important for relationships and knowing there will be obstacles.

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  20. Other Mary says:

    Time tests us all, doesn’t it? The form your verse takes looks to me like a solid tree that could truely bloom for many years.

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  21. Gail says:

    Beautiful.

    Thanks for your kind comment.

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  22. annell4 says:

    Yes, it always seems there are things that get in the way.

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  23. Elizabeth says:

    Obstacles often demand thought, choice, and change. That often can lead to growth,

    Elizabeth

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  24. Truedessa says:

    A lovely cinquain…

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  25. So true it takes time and fervor to develop a good relationship ~ obstacles can indeed make it stronger ~ a wise cinquain πŸ™‚

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  26. Such a beautiful expression of truth

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  27. kaykuala h says:

    Time is the essence for it is given all the chances to make good!

    Hank

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  28. dsnake1 says:

    neat little cinquain. nicely done. πŸ™‚

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  29. gillena says:

    Your cinquain ends on a very adamant note Sanaa; thanks for sharing at Monday WRites today

    much love…

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  30. Wendy Bourke says:

    Cool form and a wise perspective. An awesome little Cinquain.

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  31. Susmit says:

    You have captured the very essence of a relationship….so nicely penned!

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  32. G L Meisner says:

    Yes we should be fervent to keep our love strong.

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  33. The word fervent is so planted and grounded that I believe you.

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  34. Torie says:

    Obstacles often make relationships stronger. Very nice!

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  35. ZQ says:

    Sweet, precise, and well written!

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  36. A beautiful snapshot of time and blooming love…. β™₯

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  37. Sara McNulty says:

    How lovely, Sanaa! Keep blooming.

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