Might I crumble down and fall;
Steer me clear with your grace.
Bring down the granite wall;
Encircle me with an embrace.
Because my life was not,
Spent in hiding.
You have become,
My silver lining.
Don’t leave me with my demon;
This emptiness surrounds me.
Shine your guidance upon me;
And let me soar towards Eden.
Because my life was not,
Spent in hiding.
You have become,
My silver lining.
Upheaval from the old ruins;
Where love was torn apart.
Can’t decipher what I’m doing;
Follow the instinct of the heart.
Because my life was not,
Spent in hiding.
You have become,
My silver lining.
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Posted for Poems in April @ Real Toads
A rally cry for hope and love, thanks for sharing!
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Love the way this is created as a love song..
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The repetition worked very effectively! Nice.
ZQ
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Hi Sanaa–(I am Karin–also out lawyer on blogger). A real poem of redemption here. Very nice; full of longing even in the gratitude. Thanks so much for participating . K>
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Sounds like a song to me!
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You have become,
My silver lining…………. Oh, Oh, Oh, I love that!
Hello Debi,
Yeah kinda like a chorus isn’t it 🙂
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I am honestly wondering if you dream in rhyme form? I’ve never been one to rattle of a rhyme as easily as you. Is it something that comes naturally for you, or do you have some top secret book of rhymes that don’t suck?
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LOL well it comes naturally to me as I tend to sing along while composing 🙂 Its sort of habitual now. Glad you liked it 🙂 Highly appreciated your kind remarks! Lots of love
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The repeated refrain works really well…….I like the following of one’s heart.
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When the silver linings come, you have to go for them. I think Mae West may have painted on her own. ;_)
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Some wonderful time, space and matter/density images in this piece AND You have used rhyme in an effective and innovative way, as well. Lovely.
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“Because my life was not,
Spent in hiding.
You have become,
My silver lining.”
Love the repetition of the verse. Mae fought hard in a man’s world. Beautiful poem.
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Nice to see a silver lining poem, after all the ‘halves’. 🙂
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Very beautiful… We all have our silver linings too… Without whom our lives become dark and uneventful!
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the silver lining is so peaceful and hopeful.
Lovely poem Sunny one
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